Question

你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，内容主要包括：

优点： 1.话题广泛 2. 图片丰富 3. 有助于提高学习兴趣

建议： 适当降低词汇难度

注意：1.字数100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯 ；3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Editor,

As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer

As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics , such as science, culture, and history. These topics , I think , are very popular with us students. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, I’d like to suggest changing them into easier ones.

Best wishes,

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，内容主要包括：优点： 1.话题广泛 2. 图片丰富 3. 有助于提高学习兴趣。建议： 适当降低词汇难度。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.字数100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯 ；3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.过去分词作定语；One of them is that we can find a variety of topics , such as science, culture, and history.表语从句在句中出现；What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better.句中运用了非限制性定语从句；Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject.句中定语从句和现在完成时态完美结合；However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us.定语从句再次出现在句中，恰到好处；另外文章中还使用了高级词汇和短语such as、What’s more、However、herefore、suggest changing等，让文章大放异彩。

考点：考查书信是话题作文