Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词;

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉;

修改： 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It is good to see that today more people have realized the importance exercising and are playing sports regular. But the problem is that there are not enough sports facilities to meet the public growing demand. I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends. Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and possible to find a free one. It seems that all courts in the city were always full. Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. But on rainy days or in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, and the charge is high. The government should build more public sports facilities, so easier access will encourage more people participate in sports.

Answer

1.importance→ importance of

2.regularly→ regular

3.public→ public’s

4.Therefore→ However

5.possible—impossible

6.were→ are

7.permitted→ permitting

8.in outdoors → outdoors

9.much→ many

10.to participate

【解析】

1.importance→ importance of the importance∧exercising 锻炼的重要性，所以应加 of

2.regularly→ regular are playing sports regular。 副词修饰动词。regular改为 regularly

3.public→ public’s meet the public growing demand 应该用名词所有格修饰demand，公众增长的需要。public改为public’s

4.Therefore→ However I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends. Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field 根据上下文此处应为转折关系Therefore 改为However

5.possible—impossible 句意：找到一个免费的篮球场地是不可能的。故把possible—impossible。

6.were→ are It seems that all courts in the city were always full 文章叙述现在事情所以应用一般现在时态。 were 改为 are。

7.permitted→ permitting Weather permitted, we can play in outdoors 此处没有连词，所以应是独立主格做状语，permitted改为permitting。

8.in outdoors → outdoors we can play in﹨outdoors. outdoors 是副词，前面不用介词，所以去掉介词 in。

9.much→ many we have to turn to indoor courts. There are not much in my city, 此处指的是场地courts，所以应用修饰复数名词的many 代替much。

10.

【名师点拨】

1. 动词不定式作宾语补足语

encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事；want sb. to do 想让某人做某事；invite sb. to do邀请某人做某事； ask sb. to do 请求某人做某事；order sb. to do命令某人做某事； tell sb. to do告诉某人做某事；force sb. to do 强迫某人做某事；allow sb. to do允许某人做某事； forbid sb. to do 禁止某人做某事；persuade sb. to do 劝说某人做某事。

2.不带to 的动词不定式作宾语补足语

have/make/see/watch/hear/let/notice/observe/feel/look at/listen to sb. do sth.

注意：help sb. (to) do sth.

温馨提示：不带to 的动词不定式作宾语补足语，但是变成被动语态时要把to加上。He made me feel at home. （主动语态）I was made to feel at home.（被动语态）

考点：考查短文改错