Question

短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Everyone has a dream. We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or tough. As Senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three year, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only had I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxiety and pressure did discourage from me at times and with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it.

I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter what challenging it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb said,“Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”

Answer

1.achieve → achieving

2.Senior前加 a

3.year → years

4.that → what

5.had → have

6.去掉from

7.and→ but

8.has → is

9.what → how

10.said → says

【解析】

1.achieve → achieving 考查非谓语动词。On one’s way to 去往。。的路上，to是介词，后面加动名词形式；

2.Senior前加 a 考查冠词。句意：做为一个高三的学生，我与同学们有相同的梦想，被理想的大学录取。

3.year → years 考查名词的复数。In the past three years在过去的三年里；

4.that → what 考查宾语从句。句意：在过去的三年里，我做一切来武装自己，用老师教给的知识来丰富自己。With后面跟宾语从句；

5.had → have 考查动词的时态。根据but also I have got closer to my dream可知用现在完成时。

6.去掉from 考查动词的用法。句意：焦虑和压力使我丧失信心。Discourage是及物动词，不用介词from.

7.and→ but 考查连词。句意：但在师生的鼓励下，我认为我能成功，与上文形成对比关系，故用but。

8.has → is 考查固定短语。句意：我肯定实现我的大学梦还有很长的路要走。There be句型的一般现在时结构；

9. 考查状语从句。句意：无论有多大的挑战，我都将把它实现；

10. → says 考查动词的时态。句意：象谚语中说的，有志者事竟成；

考点 ：短文改错。