Question

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I always think my mother is also your good friend. When I lose my first tooth, when I found a friend, and when I fell off from my bike, she was there. She was proud when I succeeded but supportive when I failed. She always listened me. She seemed to know when I was asking for advices and when I just needed a good cry. We actual shared experiences, hopes, sadness and fears. She made me felt that my opinions were never small and silly. She never forgot to tell me what she believed in me. Now my mother is facing with some difficulties in life. I want to tell her everything will be OK and I believe in her, too.

Answer

1.your →my

2.lose→lost

3.去掉 from

4.but→and

5.me前加to

6.advices→advice

7.actual →actually

8.felt →feel

9.what→that或者删除what

10.facing→faced

【解析】

试题分析：我认为母亲是我最好的朋友。当我成功时候母亲为我自豪，当我失意的时候，母亲给予我支持。我们一起分享快乐，分担伤痛，彼此相信对方。

1.your →my考查代词。根据句意 我认为我的母亲是我的好朋友。文中表达我的，所以改为my。

2.lose→lost考查动词时态。该句运用三个并列动词表示过去无论发生什么事情，母亲都会在场。所以用动词的过去式态。故把lose改为lost。

3.去掉 from考查短语。fall off 意思是跌落。fell from 意思是从高处落下。句意为从自行车上跌落。所以选用词组fall off。故去掉 from

4.but→and考查连词。根据句意 当我成功时母亲为我感到自豪，当我失败时母亲给予我支持。两个小分句之间为并列关系。And表示并列，而but 表示转折。故把but改为and。

5.me前加to考查短语。Listen to sb 意思为倾听某人，to 不能省略。故me前加to。

6.advices→advice考查名词。Advice 为不可数名词，故把advices改为advice。

7.actual →actually 考查副词。在这句话中修饰的是动词share，要用其副词形式来修饰动词。故把actual 改为actually。

8.felt →feel考查动词。Make sb do sth 让某人做某事，do位置应该为动词的原形。故把felt 改为feel。

9.what→that或者删除what 考查连接词。Tell的用法是tell sb sth或者是tell sb +that 从句，that 可以省略。故把what改为that或者删除what。

10.facing→faced考查短语。Sb be faced with sth 意思为某人面对某物，故把facing改为faced。