Question

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was real nervous when I got to my new school. I grabbed our bag and walked down toward the dormitory building. With my joy, I got warm welcome, and was shown to my room. After setting down my stuff and chose my bed, I was led to the Fog room. I saw some girl sitting in the middle of the floor, played games. A girl saw me, but she said, “Pleased to meet you.” Everyone had turned around, came running at me and formed a circle around me. After a while, I sat down by Hailey, that was my first friend there.

Answer

1.real→really

2.our→my

3.With→To

4.warm welcome前加a

5.chose→choosing

6.girl→girls

7.played→playing

8.but→and

9.had turned去掉had

10.that→who

【解析】

试题分析：文中作者描述了刚转学到新学校的情况，受到了同学们的热烈欢迎。

1.real→really考查副词。此处修饰形容词nervous用副词，此处指我真的很紧张，要用real的副词形式，故real→really.

2.our→my考查代词。句意：我抓着我的书包朝宿舍楼走去。此处指“我的书包”，故our→my.

3.With→To考查固定短语。此处是“让我吃惊的是”，用To my joy，故With→To.

4.warm welcome前加a考查冠词。此处welcome为可数名词，指“我受到了热烈的欢迎”。故warm welcome前加a。

5.chose→choosing考查动词。句中有and连接并列的两个成分，After是介词后用-ing形式setting和choosing，故chose→choosing.

6.girl→girls考查名词。句中有some修饰girl要用复数表示“一些女孩”，故girl→girls.

7.played→playing考查动词。此处是“看到某人正做某事”用see sb. doing sth.，故played→playing。

8.but→and考查连词。句意：一个女孩看到我对我说“很高兴见到你”。前后是并列关系不是转折关系，故but→and。

9.had turned去掉had考查时态。全文描述了作者刚转学时的情况用过去时，故had turned去掉had。

10.that→who考查代词。此处是非限制性定语从句，非限制性定语从句中不能用that,指人用who,故that→who。