Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（  ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除；把多余的词 用斜线（ \  ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1；每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

A discussion about hiking had been held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore  the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think not safe to organize such dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

Answer

1.had –has

2.or more ---and

3.the nature去掉the

4.deep---deeply

5.relaxing---relaxed

6.ever—never

7.because后面加of

8.life—lives

9.think后面加it

10.which—that

【解析】

1.考查动词的时态。句意：一场关于远足的讨论在我们班举行。用现在完成时。

2.考查连词。句意：一些学生认为远足可以使人们更健康，充满活力和与自己更和谐。表达并列连接。

3.考查冠词。Nature是抽象名词，故不用冠词。

4.考查副词。句意：他们发现自己被大自然深深地吸引。Deeply用来修饰atract.

5.考查形容词。Relaxed 用来修饰人，意思是放松的。Relaxing,用来修饰物，表示 令人放松的。

6.考查副词。句意：但是现在远足者开始去探索些人们没有去过的地方。

7.考查短语。句意：事故时不是会发生因为对于远足知识的缺乏，because是连词用来连接两个句子。

8.考查固定短语。Lose one’s life失去生命，life的形式随着one’s的变化而变化。

9.考查动词的用法。Think it adj to do 这个句型中it做形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的不定式。

10.考查同位语从句。句意：他们建议，必须有一定的立法和在参加活动之前必须经过专业的训练。Suggestion后面跟着同位语从句，由that来引导。