Question

第二节  书面表达（满分25分）

下图描述了一种令家长和老师担忧的现象，部分学生（甚至是即将面临高考的学生）在学习过程中，为了不费精力脑力地完成作业而利用网络抄袭的现象。请根据你对该图的理解写一篇英语短文，词数120左右。内容包括（可适当增加细节，使行文连贯）：

（1）简要阐述图片反映的现象；  （2）分析造成该现象的原因（至少两点）；  （3）提出自己的看法。

Answer

The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information. However, this is not always the case.

As is vividly shown in the picture, a boy is happy with the fact that he can depend on the Internet to finish tasks without any difficulty. It mirrors a common phenomenon. Nowadays, students tend to make use of the Internet to gain information they need.

There are some reasons accounting for it. To begin with, students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information, where problems can be solved with the help of several clicks. What’s more, there’s no doubt that the pressure to succeed also causes students to turn to computers for accurate answers. As a result, it’s likely that students will lose interest in studying, which is not beneficial to their overall development.

In my opinion, measures must be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks. Besides, what teachers and parents should do is encouraging students to be creative. Finally, doing tasks independently is of great significance.

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