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My summer vacation was divided in four parts. First , I went traveling with my cousin which is the same age as me. We went to many places of interests in China and enjoyed myself very much. And we planned to travel abroad next summer. Then I learned to play guitar. I  went to my guitar class three times a week and practice a lot during the vacation. I still played music in my spare time and felt quite relaxing. Then I spent a lot of time read classic works by famous writers. What’s more, since my mom was busy, I helped do many housework. I expect the next summer will come over soon!

 

1.in改为into 2.which改为who 3.interests改为interest 4.myself改为ourselves 5.play之后加the 6.practice改为practiced 7.relaxing改为relaxed 8.read改为reading 9.many改为much 10.删掉over 【解析】 1.in改为into;考查固定短语,be divided into..被划分为..因此用into。 2.which改为who;原文中提到I went traveling with my cousin who is the same age as me.我和与我同龄的堂兄一起旅游了。可知who引导的定语从句主语是人,而which是指物。 3.interests改为interest;考查固定短语,名胜古迹,应该表达为places of interest。所以去掉s。 4.myself改为ourselves;根据原句We went to many places of interests in China and enjoyed myself very much.(我们参观了中国的许多名胜古迹,并且玩的很愉快)可知整个句子的主语是we,and连接一个并列句,所以后面的句子主语也是we,应用ourselves。 5.play之后加the;考查固定搭配。play后加乐器要加定冠词the,如play the piano, play the violind,play the guitar等,因此应该加the. 6.practice改为practiced;考查句子时态。根据原句I went to my guitar class three times a week and practice a lot during the vacation.可知前一部分是一般过去时,and连接并列句,后面也同样用一般过去时。 7.relaxing改为relaxed;relaxing修饰物,而relaxed修饰人,原文是讲我感到很放松,所以应用relaxed。 8.read改为reading;考查固定短语,spend time on sth或spend time (in) doing sth.(花费时间在某事上或花费时间做某事),所以应该用reading。 9.many改为much;many+可数名词复数,much+不可数名词,housework是不可数名词,与much搭配。 10. 考点:考查短文改错 【名师点睛】 短文改错常见错误类型: 1. 谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点,常见动词错误类型有①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;②and前后动词时态不一致;③主谓不一致; ④缺少动词,特别是be动词; ⑤第三人称单数形式错用;⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。如原文第6小题:I went to my guitar class three times a week and practice a lot during the vacation.属于第①种错误类型,前一部分是一般过去时,and连接并列句,后面也同样用一般过去时 2. 名词的常见错误:单复数名词错用,可数名词与不可数名词错用。I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(subject改为subjects) Their word were a great encouragement to me.(word改为words) Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.(knowledges改为knowledge) 3. 连词错误,连词包括关系代词、副词,并列连词and/ or/but等。关于连词,一般考查从句关系who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。 I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. (错用了who的所有格形式,改为whose) I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.(此处应该是并列的关系而非转折,but改为and) Clever as she is, but she works very hard.(as意为“尽管”,不能再跟but连用,所以去掉but) 又比如原文第2小题I went traveling with my cousin which is the same age as me.错用了关系代词which,这里指人应该用who来代指。 4. 冠词错误:误用a和an(根据单词的第一个音素来判定);误用a/an和the(固定搭配,或泛指、特指;多冠词或少冠词) We maybe one family and live under a same roof. (a 改为the,the same 是固定搭配) As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of pants. (mountain是可数名词需用冠词,所以其前加a) I hope you have pleasant journey.(journey是可数名词,故have后加a)比如原文第5小题,Then I learned to play guitar. play后加乐器要加定冠词the,如play the piano, play the violind,play the guitar等,因此应该加the. 5. 形容词和副词错误:系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词smell/feel);词性的误用(形容词修饰名词;副词修饰动词、形容词)。I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (time是名词所以要用形容词wonderful修饰) My pronunciation was terribly.(was后用形容词,terribly改为terrible.) 6. 代词错误:代词的主格和宾格(I / me ;he/him; she/ her; we/ us they/ them )错误;反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)使用错误;代词的单数和复数使用错误;代词指代错误;多代词或少代词。比如原文小题4根据原句We went to many places of interests in China and enjoyed myself very much.(我们参观了中国的许多名胜古迹,并且玩的很愉快)可知整个句子的主语是we,and连接一个并列句,所以后面的句子主语也是we,应用ourselves。 7. 非谓语动词的常见错误:不定式、动名词作主语、宾语时;and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致(尤其距离较远时);介词后用动名词形式作宾语;某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。 Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper. (enjoy 后需接动名词,talk改为talking) But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(go作主语,应改为going) Children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. (介词后用动名词形式作宾语,read改为reading) I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees. (and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致,故saw改为seeing) 8. 介词错误:词组中的介词误用;介词意思理解偏差;介词的多用或少用 There are too many people among my family. (among改为in,in my family 为固定搭配) I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. (去掉at, the moment 引导从句)
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D. Poor Countries: Beginning to Use Solar Energy.

 

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