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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As a senior three student, it won’t take long after I graduate. Now, I have many to share with my fellow students.

Firstly, I’d like to show my appreciation to those who stand by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends including. Without their help or advice, my life will be different. Secondly, it’s high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Thirdly, I’ve made my mind to make every effort to study, for hard work is the key to a success. Finally I want to express my hope that all the younger fellow can make full use of time, because time and tide waiting for no man.

 

1.after ----- before 2.many ----much 3.including----included 4.will----would 5.I----me 6.firm----firmly 7.made 后面加up 8.去掉 a 9.fellow----fellows 10.waiting----wait 【解析】 1.after ----- before 考查before的语法。固定句型It will be/take......before......将还有......就....... 句意:还有不久我就要毕业了。故将after改为before。 2.many ----much 考查代词。句意:我有许多话要和我的朋友们分享。分析可知“许多话;许多事情”为不可数名词,应用much指代而不是many。故将many改为much。 3.including----included 考查非谓语动词。句意:我要向一直陪伴在我身边的人们致谢,包括老师,父母还有朋友。分析可知teachers, parents and friends included为独立主格结构作状语。teachers, parents and friends与include为动宾关系,故用include的过去分词形式。故将including改为included。 4.will----would 考查时态。句意:没有他们的帮助,我的生活将会变得不同。分析可知Without their help or advice, my life would be different为含蓄条件的虚拟语气,对现在情况进行虚拟,主句时态采用would/should/could/might+V.形式。故将will改为would。 5.I----me 考查代词。句意:是时候我向那些被伤害过或误会过的同学说对不起了。分析可知for后面应用代词的宾格形式。故将I改为me。 6.firm----firmly 考查词性。句意:我坚定地相信沟通和微笑是友谊间的桥梁。分析可知firmly修饰动词believe,应用副词形式。故将firm改为firmly。 7.made 后面加up 考查介词。句意:我下定决心努力学习。固定短语make up one’s mind to do sth.下定决心做某事。故在made后面加上up。 8.去掉 a 考查冠词。句意:我下定决心努力学习,因为努力学习是成功的关键。success作“成功”是为不可数名词。故将a去掉。 9.fellow----fellows 考查单复数。句意:最后我想表达我的希望,也就是所有低年级的同学们能够充分利用时间。分析可知all the younger fellows为复数,故将fellow改为fellows。 10.waiting----wait 考查动词。句意:最后我想表达我的希望,也就是所有低年级的同学们能够充分利用时间,因为时不我待。分析可知在原因状语从句because time and tide waiting for no man中,主语为time and tide,谓语动词应用一般现在时的复数形式。故将waiting改为wait。 考点:考查短文改错
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