Question

假如你是李华，你的美国网友Jack目前正在一家孔子学院学习汉语，你们俩约定每周都给对方写一封信，他用汉语，你用英语，以期相互学习和帮助。最近你收到他发来的一封电子邮件，请你根据下列提示用英语给他写一封回信：

1. 表扬他的进步，并指出来信中的错误；

2. 给他一些改进的具体建议；

3. 你将发给他一篇游记，期待他对你的邮件进行回复。

注意：1. 词数：80-120；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

I’m just so glad to receive your regular letter. ___________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Jack,

I’m just so glad to receive your regular letter.

I’m proud to tell you that you have made rapid progress in such a short time! You letter is better written than the last one. Obviously, you have mastered how to use some Chinese characters freely. But it doesn’t mean there’s no problem at all. For instance, unlike English, we usually use “因为……所以……” in one sentence. So you should correct the fourth sentence in your letter. And I advise you to do more reading and try to use these sentence patterns in your writing as possible as you can.

I wrote a travel journal about our trip to a natural park yesterday. I’ll send it to you later. If there is any mistake in my writing, please tell me and correct it for me. I’m sure we both will make great progress this way.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇书信。文章给出了提纲式汉语提示。成文时应注意一下几点：（1）内容要点要齐全；a表扬他的进步，并指出来信中的错误;b给他一些改进的具体建议;c你将发给他一篇游记，期待他对你的邮件进行回复。（2）人称：以第一人称为主；（3）时态：一般过去时和一般现在时为主；（4）适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅；（5）恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】1.使用高级句型：（1）I’m proud to tell you that you have made rapid progress in such a short time!.（2）It’s a great help for me to learn English well.2.使用了过渡词语：Obviously. For instance .But it doesn’t mean there’s no problem at all.,. 3.使用了重要短语：advise you to do. make great progress. looking forward to doing.hear from sb.

【考点】考查书信式话题作文