Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

  增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

  删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

  修改: 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

  Yesterday I showed to my friend Peter around Beijing city．We started off at 8:00 a.m．First we went to the Forbidden City, which was one of the most popular tourist spot in Beijing．Then we visited the History Museum．We observed a lot of valuable things in them and we learned a lot about Chinese history．After a quick meal, we wentto Beihai Park．Upon arrival, we were all struck by its beautiful scenes．We spent a whole afternoon appreciated the wonder．It was until 18:00 p．m．that we went back.

  We did have a wonderful time．Peter was very pleased with my arrangement that he

invited me to a new-built western restaurant to have a big meal.

Answer

1.去掉showed 后面的to

2.was → is

3.spot → spots

4.them → it

5.all → bot

6.a → the

7.appreciated → appreciating

8.在until前面加not

9.very → so

10.new-built →newly-built

【解析】

1.show sB． around是固定搭配，意思是：带某人参观… 。

2.故宫是北京最受欢迎的游览地之一这是客观事实，故用一般现在时，故改成is。

3.由于spot前面的修饰词是one of，故spot要用复数形式。

3.根据句意，可知道作者所说的是他们从历史博物馆那里（单数名词）学到了很多东西，故宾语用单数形式的人称代词it。

4.由于文章里提到的就只有作者和他朋友两人，故代词用both而不用all。

5.Whole前面不能用a只能用the修饰。

6.Spend … (in) doing sth．为固定搭配，意思是：花费（时间/金钱）去做某事，因此此处appreciating。

7.联系上下文，可知要在此处用否定词not，组成固定搭配not until，意思是：直到…才…。

8.根据下文出现了that，而且that后面又有一个完成的句子，可知这是一个so…that的固定搭配，意思是：如此…以致…。

9.由于built是动词过去分词，故用副词修饰，故改成newly。