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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分

It was raining hardly outside, that made it difficult for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom. I rushed out and it was my mother, who is already in the fifties, that brought me lunch, in spite the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for our children. But what had the children done in return?All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parents should serve for them unconditionally. My dear mum or dad, thank you very much for bringing me up. How shall I do for you?

 

1.hardly改为hard 2.that改为which 3.passed改为pass 4.the改为her 5.spite后面加of 6.our改为their 7.had改为have 8.去掉for 9.or改为and 10.How改为What 【解析】 试题分析: 1.hardly改为hard 考查副词。副词hardly几乎不。副词hard修饰动词rain,在句中充当状语,意为“雨下得很大”。 2.that改为which 考查非限制性定语从句。关系代词which指代前面一句话的内容在句中做主语。句意:外面雨下得很大,这扔我很难外出吃午饭。 3.passed改为passing 考查动词短语。短语see sb doing 看见某人正在做某事。表示这两个动作同时发生。句意:我看见一个熟悉的身影从我们班级旁边经过。 4.the改为her 考查固定短语。短语in one’s fifties在某人五十几岁的时候。句意:我冲出去了,这是我那已经五十几岁的妈妈给我送来了午饭。 5.spite后面加of 考查介词短语in spite of不关,尽管;本句表示尽管雨下得很大,但是我妈妈还是来给我送饭了。 6.our改为their 考查代词。句意:在中国很多父母亲为他们的孩子做出了巨大的牺牲。根据前面的parents说明后面应该使用their指代parents。 7.had改为have 考查时态。本文的基本时态是一般现在时,所以本句也应该使用一般现在时。句意:孩子又做了什么事情作为回报呢? 8.去掉for 考查动词。动词serve“服务”、“服役”,当serve意为“服务”的时候,是一个及物动词,后面要直接加宾语,介词for是多余的。 9.or改为and 考查连词。句意:我亲爱的妈妈和爸爸,感谢你们把我抚养长大。连词or表示选择,and表示并列。根据句意可知使用and表示并列关系。 10.How改为What 考查疑问词。句意:我能为你们做什么呢?what引导起这个特殊疑问句在句中充当动词do的宾语。 【名师点睛】 高考短文改错考点层次一般而言可依次分为词法的测试、句法的测试和语篇的测试三个层面。考点层次越高,就越能测试出考生运用语言的能力。低层次的考点往往侧重于语法方面的考查,而高层次的考点往往侧重于考生对文章意义方面的理解。 一、词法改错 词法的测试包括:定冠词和不定冠词的用法;名词的单复数和名词的所有格;动词的时态、语态、语气,情态动词和非谓语动词等;人称代词、人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等的用法;介词的搭配;并列连词、从属连词的用法;形容词、副词的区别以及比较级和最高级的用法;固定搭配和习惯用法。 例如:本题中的小题1:hardly改为hard(副词用错) 小题4:the改为her(代词用错) 小题6:our改为their(代词用错) 小题9:or改为and(并列连词用错) 二、句法改错 句法的测试包括:主谓语在数上的一致性;名词性从句、定语从句和强调句;句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性和逻辑性. 例如:本题中的小题2:that改为which(定语从句关系词用错)小题10:How改为What(特殊疑问句疑问词用错) 三、语篇改错 语篇的测试包括:上下文的时态是否一致;上下文中的代词指代是否一致;上下文中的逻辑关系是否一致。 考点:考查短文改错
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The sweet music of that laughter  3. (bring) back a hundred memories of past winters. I remembered   4.(catch) snowflakes on my tongue, building snowmen, making snow angels, sledding down hills, and always losing the snowball fights with first    5. brothers and then my own children. Standing there in that warm coat of remembering made the wind   6. (little) cold. I looked up, stuck out my tongue, and 7.  the first time in years caught a snowflake on it. It tasted so fresh   8.  clean. It tasted like youth, like joy, and like love. I looked up to the heavens and thanked God for all of my memories and for the simple          9.  (true) that you are never 10. old to be young again.

 

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阅读下面短文, 从短文后各题所给的四个选项 (A、B、C和D) 中, 选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项, 并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

A senior monk and a junior monk were traveling together. One day, they came to a ________ with a strong current. As the monks were ________ to cross the river, they saw a very young and beautiful woman. She asked if they could help her ________ to the other side.

The two monks glanced at one another because they had ________  not to have physical contact with women.

Then, without a word, the older monk ________ the woman, carried her across the river, ________ her gently on the other side, and carried on his journey.

The younger monk couldn’t believe ________  had just happened. After rejoining his companion, he was ________ , and several hours passed without a word between them.

________, the younger monk couldn’t contain himself any longer, and asked, “As monks, we are not permitted to have body contact with a woman; how could you then   ________ that woman?”

The________  monk looked at him and replied, “Brother, I set her down on the other side of the river, why are you________  carrying her?”

This simple Zen story has a beautiful message about living in the ________  moment. How often do we carry around past ________ , holding onto dislikes when the only person we are really ________  is ourselves?

We all ________ times in life when other people say things or ________  in a way that does harm to us. We can   ________  to think carefully over past actions or events, but it will finally weigh us down and use up our energy.

Instead, we can choose to let go of what doesn’t serve us anymore and   ________  on the present moment. Until we can find a level of peace and ________  in the present circumstances of our lives, we will never be content, because “now” is all we will ever have.

1.A. river        B. hole          C. bank          D. sea

2.A. hoping       B. preparing     C. complaining   D. taking

3.A. fly         B. jump         C. cross        D. dive

4.A. analyzed    B. answered     C. protected    D. promised

5.A. picked up    B. walked away   C. threw over    D. turned down

6.A. passed      B. directed     C. placed        D. fixed

7.A. which        B. where         C. how           D. what

8.A. sad          B. speechless    C. nervous       D. afraid

9.A. Originally   B. Hesitantly   C. Madly         D. Finally

10.A. carry       B. fetch        C. ship          D. point

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12.A. just        B. ever          C. still         D. always

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15.A. touching   B. enjoying     C. changing      D. hurting

16.A. go through B. get through   C. go for        D. get up

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18.A. pretend   B. refuse        C. choose        D. hesitate

19.A. concentrate B. depend        C. put           D. move

20.A. kindness   B. surprise      C. happiness    D. impression

 

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Of the many unpleasant emotions we can experience, fear may top the list.   1.  Fear can also keep us from pursuing the things in life that really matter like following our dreams, and developing important relationships. I have some ideas, though, of how to be free from fear.

Experience fear.

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Create space.

The first and most important step to being fearless is to create some space between ourselves and the emotion of fear. This isn't accomplished by ignoring the fear, or trying to talk ourselves out of it.    3. In fact, a recent research shows that by simply admitting the emotion we actually begin to reverse the "fight or flight(逃避)" response in the body.

Control the breath and feel the fear.

Once we acknowledge the presence of fear, the second step is to control the breathing so that it becomes slower and gentler. We try to make the breath just a little bit longer, and feel how fear manifests(展现) in the body.    4.

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C. Fear, if left uncontrolled, can even destroy our life.

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F. But fear is more than just physically unpleasant.

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Every year in America, high-school students who want to go to college take a national examination called the Scholastic Aptitude Test, or SAT in a shortened way. Their score is an important factor in determining which colleges will admit them. The Scholastic Aptitude Test measures one’s mathematical ability and use of the English language. Traditionally, the English part involved grammatical questions and paragraphs that test reading comprehension.

But the SAT folks have added a single question, to be answered in an essay, handwritten on the spot. That’s an interesting way to test writing ability, but content aside, have you ever seen young people’s handwriting lately? Or anyone’s for that matter, in this age of computer keyboards? Students write numbers and sign their names on bank checks. They scribble class notes in what can generously be described as the written word.

Yet today’s kids are asked to write, thoughtfully and clearly, for several minutes on this SAT Test. Good luck to the text scorers who must work out difficultly the scrawl (潦草的笔迹)of young people who’ve been typing on computers since the age of three! Teachers insist that good handwriting can not only help one’s score on the SAT, but also, later on in life, impress potential employers. And don’t forget, we all have to turn to handwriting from time to time, as computers go down when power goes out.

Then how to improve the handwriting? Well, with a few simple steps you can improve your handwriting.

Position the pen. You should hold the pen between the forefinger and the thumb. You should then rest it near the first knuckle(指节)of the middle finger. The rest of your fingers should be curled (卷曲) under your hand and your hand should remain relaxed.

Evaluate your handwriting. What do you like and what you don’t like about the way you write? Make changes to your letters till you like how they look.

Take your time. Make sure that, while you are writing, you take your time. Speed is bound to make your writing messy- looking. If it is worth writing well, then take your time.

Practice. Practice it a lot; it’s not enough to do it once and hope for the best. It has to be something you work at to make great improvements.

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B. math, grammar, reading and handwriting

C. math, foreign language and writing

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A. Practice writing a lot.

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C. Relaxing your hand when holding the pen.

D. Changing your letters till you like how they look.

3.The text is to present the fact that __________.

A. writing seems to be very important in the SAT

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D. kids don’t know how to write in the computer age

 

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Take the rain forests for example. In their natural state, the spreading branches overhead shut out sunlight and prevent the growth of plants on the forest floor. By pulling down trees and eating plants, elephants create open spaces, allowing new plants to grow on the forest floor. In such situations, the forests become suitable for large-hoofed plant-eaters to move around and for small-sized plant-eaters to obtain their food as well.

Scientists are worried now that the African elephant has become an endangered species. If the elephant dies out, scientists say, many other animals will also disappear from vast areas of forest and savanna, greatly changing and worsening the whole ecosystem.

1.What is the passage mainly about?

A. Disappearance of African elephants.

B. Forests and savannas as habitats for African elephants.

C. The effect of African elephants' search for food.

D. The eating habit of African elephants.

2.The African elephant influences the ecosystem in the following ways except that          .

A. it creates open areas in deep tropical forests as well as woodlands

B. it pulls off the branches and leaves, shutting out the sunshine

C. its eating habit can be made use of by large-hoofed and small-sized animals

D. it encourages some kinds of plants growing in an indirect way

3.According to the passage, which of the following statements is true?

A. Numerous grown plants are the favorites of plant-eaters.

B. The extinction of the African elephant has nothing to do with the ecosystem.

C. Quantities of plants are consumed by African elephants, including branches and underbushes.

D. The forest floor in rain forests is scarcely dotted with new shoots.

4.The passage is developed mainly by            .

A. presenting the changes in time order

B. making comparisons and giving examples

C. classifying similarities and differences

D. showing the effect and then explaining the reasons

 

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