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假如你是李华,Sara是你的英文笔友,她在微博上发帖求助。你就她的帖子中所提出的问题,简要分析其原因,并给出一些建议。

Hi,recently I’ve been bothered a lot for I always fail to carry on the goals I set.

Various obstacles (障碍物) are always getting in my way. Could you give me some

suggestions on how to start realizing my goals?

 

 

 

 

 

 

写作要点: 1. 就这个问题告诉Sara你的观点;

2. 简要分析其原因;

3. 给Sara提出解决问题的具体建议。

注意: 1. 信的开头、结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数;

2. 词数120左右。

Hi, Sara,

As a student of your age, I understand your situation. __________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Hi Sara, As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you’re facing is common among us teenagers. It is believed that we get pretty good at finding excuses to give up trying when there are obstacles in the way. The reason is that we’re creatures of routine and habit. Here are some tips on how to get moving. First and foremost, once you’ve set a goal and decide how you’re going about it, you might as well divide it into smaller ones, so it’s easier to handle and less overwhelming. Besides, it is advisable to keep track of your progress and post motivating pictures or slogans within your sight, which in turn inspire yourself to keep pushing ahead. More importantly, keep it up until it is a habit to you. I really hope that you can find my suggestions useful. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 试题分析:考查半开放性作文。本文对考生的难度较大,首先考生要读懂Sara信件中存在问题,其次还要就这个问题发表个人观点,分析原因并提出建议。要点:1.Sara遇见的问题:很难克服阻碍实现目标的障碍,总在为自己不实现目标寻找借口。2.陈述个人对此现象的观点:这是年轻人的正常现象。3.原因在于我们有一些不好的习惯,这些习惯阻碍了我们努力实现自身目标。4.建议:把目标细化成一个个的小目标,这样就更容易实现了;记录自己取得的进步以增强信心。把坚持当成是自己的一个习惯。 【名师点睛】 范文布局合理,第一段总结对方存在问题,表示同情。并简单分析原因。第二段提出具体建议。第三段属于过渡段,让文章显得很有条理。本文中句式运用丰富合理,如定语从句The problem you’re facing is common among us teenagers.形式主语句:It is believed that we get pretty good at finding excuses to give up trying when there are obstacles in the way.表语从句:The reason is that we’re creatures of routine and habit.另外连接词的使用也很到位,如第二段中:first and foremost, besides, more importantly。这些好的写作手段让整篇文章显得很有档次。 考点:考查半开放性作文  
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下文中共有10处语言错误,在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不记分。

On a Friday night, a poor young artist was playing with his violin at a street corner with a large piece of paper on the ground. Before long, he was surrounding with people, who were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said, “Last night, a gentleman put an important thing into my hat with mistake. Please come to claim them soon.” Seeing this, people wondered why it could be. Some time later, a man came and take back his lottery which won a prize of $500,000. When asked why he didn’t keep it for himself, artist said, “While I don’t have much money, I live happy. However, if I lose honest, I won’t be happy forever.”

 

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阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容 (不多于3个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

My wife is addicted to shopping on the Internet.    1.  seems that she can’t control herself well, just clicking constantly with the mouse. Let me tell what happened last night.

It was the fourth time she    2.  (shop) online for hours. I had already reminded her      3.  (think) twice before buying anything, but my wife ignored what I said and replied

confidently, “With the New Year   4.  (approach), preparation is necessary. Besides, I haven’t bought things on the Internet for a WHOLE week.” Hearing her words, I was really   5.  (speech). In most cases, the things she bought aren’t good value for money. Maybe she just enjoys    6.  process of buying online.

Nowadays,   7. the development of technology, online shopping is becoming more and more convenient. Those    8.  stay at home can buy whatever they want. In the meanwhile, it causes a series of    9. (problem). One of them is more spending, because people are    10. (easy) attracted by the discount. So how to keep a good state of mind in front of temptation is an important lesson many people need to learn.

 

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阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

My father was a self-taught mandolin (曼陀铃) player. He was one of the best string   ________ players in our town. He could not   ________ music, but if he heard a tune a few times, he could play it.

Dad loved to play the mandolin for his   ________  for he knew we enjoyed singing, and hearing him play. He was always there, ________  his time and efforts to making sure that his family had enough in their life. I had grown into a man and had children of my own ________ I realized how much he had sacrificed.

I joined the United States Air________ in January of 1962. Whenever I would come home ________ , I would ask Dad to play the mandolin. He could   ________ your soul with the tones that came out of that old mandolin. He seemed to shine when he was playing. You could see his ________ in his ability to play so well for his family.

In 1950, our family moved to Maryland. While working at Todd Steel, he was   ________ in an accident. On that particular day, Dad got the third index finger of his left hand   ________ by the machine.   ________  he didn’t lose enough of the finger where it would stop him picking up anything, it did   ________ his ability to play the mandolin. After the accident, every time we asked him to play, he would make ________ for why he couldn’t play. Eventually, we could persuade him and he would say, “Okay. But I can’t hold down on the strings and play as well as before.” For the family it didn’t make any ________ .

In August of 1993, my father was discovered with lung cancer. He chose not to receive treatments so that he could live out the rest of his life   ________  dignity. About a week before his death, we asked Dad if he would play the mandolin for us. He made excuses but said “okay”. He knew it would probably be the   ________  time he would play for us. He tuned up the old mandolin and played a few ________ . When I looked around, there was not a   ________  eye in the family. We saw before us a quiet man with an inner strength. Dad would never play the mandolin for us again. Dad was doing something he had done all his life, ________  . As sick as he was, he was still pleasing others. Dad surely could play that Mandolin!

1.A. equipment    B. musical  C. instrument   D. musician

2.A. copy        B. see       C. look at     D. read

3.A. family       B. employer  C. friends     D. audience

4.A. applying   B. paying    C. devoting     D. attaching

5.A. since        B. while     C. before      D. after

6.A. Force        B. Energy    C. Power        D. Strength

7.A. on duty    B.on leave C. on holiday  D. on vacation

8.A. touch       B. contact   C. feel         D. keep

9.A. proud       B. praise   C. please      D. pride

10.A. took part   B. participated  C. joined   D. involved

11.A. cut in      B. cut off   C. cut up      D. cut out

12.A. Although  B. If       C. Whether     D. Because

13.A. destroy     B. affect    C. effect       D. injure

14.A. uses       B. preparations  C. impressions  D. excuses

15.A. comment     B. sense   C. difference   D. decision

16.A. at          B. on        C. with        D. off

17.A. first       B. latest    C. last         D. longest

18.A. bills      B. notes   C. symbols    D. signs

19.A. wet         B. dry      C. cried       D. crying

20.A. sponsoring  B. giving  C. distributing D. taking

 

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根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

Wrong Reasons for Going to College

A college education can be priceless.   1.   If any of these following factors had a big influence on your decision, you’re probably right to second-guess yourself.

Because all your friends are going.

In only a few weeks’ time, the whole friend group will be scattered to a half dozen different colleges in a half dozen different places. Not to go will set yourself apart.    2.

Because someone else expects it from you.

Perhaps you come from a family where everyone goes to college, or maybe you’re the kid that everyone is proud to believe will be the first to get there.     3.  It’s become so much a part of the air you breathe that you’ve never stopped to consider whether you want to go or whether you’re ready to go.

4.   

It’s been tough to find even a summer job. You don’t have an alternative plan. Everyone else is doing it (see above). You think you might as well go to school. That is the lamest(无说服力的)of reasons to spend $ 20,000 or more in the next year.

Because you are afraid you’ll regret it if you don’t go.

Your uncle tells you that he regrets that he didn’t go to college. Others tell you they could have gone so much further in their career if only they had a college education.   5.   So this is not a persuasive reason for you to go to college.

A. Because you don’t want to work.

B. Friends will wonder what’s wrong with you.

C. Because you don’t know what else to do.

D. Everyone seems more excited than you are.

E. It seems that for years everyone has just thought that of course you’ll go.

F. Whatever the story is, there are always people who regret decisions they’ve made.

G. But maybe in your heart you know that you are going for the wrong reasons.

 

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When you're surfing the Internet on your laptop from your dorm or home, do you know your personal details are being gathered secretly? And would you be surprised to know the information may be sold cheaply to advertisers and marketers?

According to an investigation by The Wall Street Journal, all it takes is a tiny file in a computer-a single code consisting of a long series of numbers and letters-to record the computer user's age, gender, location, favorite movies and hobbies.

The newspaper reports that Lotame Solutions Inc., a New York company, uses an advanced software called “beacon” to capture what people are typing on a website.

Lotame packages that data into profiles (个人资料) about individuals, only without their names, and sells the profiles to companies seeking customers. Batches of such data may be sold for a few dollars.

The Wall Street Journal survey discovered that spying on Internet users is one of the fastest­growing businesses on the World Wide Web.

The “cookie”-a tiny text file put on your PC by websites or marketing firms which might be used to remember your preferences for one site, or to track you across many sites is already old news. There are new and more complex tools such as “beacon” which scan in real time what people are doing on a webpage. These beacons instantly assess the Internet user's location, income, shopping interests and even medical conditions.

Millions of Internet users around the world also face unprecedented (空前的) threats. Private, sensitive, personal and business information is being gathered and sold without their knowledge.

Companies insist the information they gather is anonymous(匿名的) and the data is used harmlessly. But the technology has grown so powerful that even some of the biggest websites in the US don't know that they were installing intrusive files on visitors' computers. These include MSN.com and Yahoo.com.

Next time you visit a webpage and find an ad banner advertising something you've been planning to buy, don't be amazed that your computer can read your mind.

1.The purpose of the passage is to ______.

A. introduce a tiny file in a computer-a single code

B. show how your individual information was let out when you surf the Internet

C. show how to protect your privacy

D. introduce a sophisticated software called “beacon”

2.All of the following statements are not true EXCEPT ______.

A. Lotame sells the profiles about individuals to companies seeking customers with their age, gender, location, hobbies and names

B. spying on Internet users is the fastest­growing business on the World Wide Web

C. some of the biggest websites in the US know they were installing intrusive files on visitors' computers

D. a tiny file in a computer-a single code consisting of a long series of numbers and letters can record the user's information

3.What’s the writer’s attitude to the issue?

A. neutral    B. optimistic    C. worried   D. indifferent

 

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