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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。

Cherry, whom is about 5 or 6 years old, is my favorite pet. About three years before, Cherry showed up at our house. I have just lost my cat and was very sadly, so I didn’t plan to own another pet. At first, we ignored her. We were getting ready leave for a vacation. My two daughter kept wanting us to keep her and fed her behind my back. Finally I had to tell them if he was still here when we got back, we would keep her. I was sure a dog would move on. Guess what? When we got back from vacation, but the dog was still around. It seemed like an angel had send her to us.

 

1.whom—who 2.before—ago 3.sadly—sad 4.have—had 5.ready后加to 6.daughter—daughters 7.he—she 8.a—the 9.去掉but 10.send—sent 【解析】 1.whom—who;whom宾格不能做非限制定语从句中的主语,而who可代指人,可做主语。 2.before—ago;表述一段时间以前用一段时间+ago。ago表示“从现在起的若干时间以前”,意思是“距今……以前”,需和过去时或过去进行时连用.before泛指“从过去起的若干时间以前”,意思是 “距过去某时……以前”“与其……(毋宁)”,常和完成时连用。, 3.sadly—sad;根据句意:我失去了我的猫,我很伤心。修饰主语,用形容词作表语。 4.have—had;文章主要讲的是过去的事情,故have用过去式。 5.ready后加to;考察固定短语:be ready to do准备好做某事。 6.daughter—daughters;两个女儿为复数概念,故用daughters。 7.he—she;句意:最终我不得不告诉她们,当我们回来了,她还在这,我们会继续养她。可知这里的她是宠物狗Cherry。前文 we ignored her,暗示了狗狗是母狗。故用she。 8.a—the;the特制前文所提到的宠物狗。而a是泛指。 9.去掉but;当我们回来的时候,那只狗仍旧在周围。文中的转折关系不成立,所以去掉but。 10. 【名师点睛】 短文改错常见错误类型: 1. 谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点,常见动词错误类型有①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;②and前后动词时态不一致;③主谓不一致; ④缺少动词,特别是be动词; ⑤第三人称单数形式错用;⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。 如小题1:send—sent;When we got back from vacation, but the dog was still around. It seemed like an angel had send her to us.当我们度假回来,那只狗仍旧在家周围。它似乎是天使送给我们的。考查固定句型had done,所以应用过去分词sent。如小题4:have—had;文章主要讲的是过去的事情,故have用过去式。 2. 名词的常见错误:单复数名词错用,可数名词与不可数名词错用。I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(subject改为subjects) Their word were a great encouragement to me.(word改为words) Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.(knowledges改为knowledge) 如小题6:daughter—daughters;My two daughter kept wanting us to keep her and fed her behind my back.两个女儿为复数概念,故用daughters。 3. 连词错误,连词包括关系代词、副词,并列连词and/ or/but等。关于连词,一般考查从句关系who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。 I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. (错用了who的所有格形式,改为whose) I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.(此处应该是并列的关系而非转折,but改为and) Clever as she is, but she works very hard.(as意为“尽管”,不能再跟but连用,所以去掉but)如小题9:去掉but;When we got back from vacation, but the dog was still around.当我们回来的时候,那只狗仍旧在周围。文中的转折关系不成立,所以去掉but。 4. 冠词错误:误用a和an(根据单词的第一个音素来判定);误用a/an和the(固定搭配,或泛指、特指;多冠词或少冠词) We maybe one family and live under a same roof. (a 改为the,the same 是固定搭配) As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of pants. (mountain是可数名词需用冠词,所以其前加a) I hope you have pleasant journey.(journey是可数名词,故have后加a) 如小题8:a—the;When we got back from vacation, but the dog was still around the特制前文所提到的宠物狗。而a是泛指。 5. 形容词和副词错误:系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词smell/feel);词性的误用(形容词修饰名词;副词修饰动词、形容词)。I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (time是名词所以要用形容词wonderful修饰) My pronunciation was terribly.(was后用形容词,terribly改为terrible.) 如小题3:sadly—sad;I have just lost my cat and was very sadly,根据句意:我失去了我的猫,我很伤心。修饰主语,用形容词作表语。 6. 代词错误:代词的主格和宾格(I / me ;he/him; she/ her; we/ us they/ them )错误;反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)使用错误;代词的单数和复数使用错误;代词指代错误;多代词或少代词。如小题1:whom—who;Cherry, whom is about 5 or 6 years old, is my favorite pet.whom宾格不能做非限制定语从句中的主语,而who可代指人,可做主语。 7. 非谓语动词的常见错误:不定式、动名词作主语、宾语时;and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致(尤其距离较远时);介词后用动名词形式作宾语;某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。 Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper. (enjoy 后需接动名词,talk改为talking) But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(go作主语,应改为going) Children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. (介词后用动名词形式作宾语,read改为reading) I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees. (and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致,故saw改为seeing) 8. 介词错误:词组中的介词误用;介词意思理解偏差;介词的多用或少用 There are too many people among my family. (among改为in,in my family 为固定搭配) I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. (去掉at, the moment 引导从句) 考点:考查语法和短语句型
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