满分5 > 高中英语试题 >

短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。...

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mary is a 16-year-old high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night. She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively. On the Sunday morning, she was about to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. We decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary had great fun, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.

 

1.devoted改为devotes 2.class改为classes 3.deeply改为deep 4.too改为so 5.去掉the 6.while改为when 7.加上with 8.We改为They 9.relaxing改为relaxed 10.but改为and 【解析】 1.devoted改为devotes;考查主谓一致。who引导的非限制性定语从句的主语是Mary,因此应该用第三人称单数。故将devoted改为devotes。 2.class改为classes;句意:她去了几堂课。class为可数名词。故将class改为classes。 3.deeply改为deep;此处不是修饰动词而是修饰名词,所以不应该用副词deeply。deep in night深夜。故将deeply改为deep。 4.too改为so;固定用法。so … that太..以至于;too…to太…以至于不能。故将too改为so。 5.去掉Sunday前面的the;固定用法。on Sunday在周末;in the morning在早上;on Sunday morning在周末早上。故去掉Sunday前面的the。 6.while改为when;固定句式。be about to do sth ….when当…的时候正要做。故将while改为when。 7.come up后加上with; 固定搭配。come up with 想出。故在come up后加上with。 8.We改为They;考查代词指代一致。整篇文章采用的是第二人称的角度。前面提到了she和her father。故将We改为They。 9.relaxing改为relaxed;考查动词的形容词形式。relax的形容词有两个形式。一是relaxing令人放松的,主要用于形容事物;二是relaxed放松的,主要是修饰人。故将relaxing改为relaxed。 10.but改为and;考查连词。energetic充满活力的,active活跃的,积极的。这两个词是同一类型的词,所以不存在转折关系。故将but改为and。 【名师点睛】 短文改错答题技巧 一、高考英语改错题的常见错误类型 1、谓语动词的时态和语态 2、句子结构和句子完整性 3、名词单复数及主谓一致问题 4、上下文语意和代词 5、介词 固定搭配 6、固定(习惯)用法 7、形容词和副词是否误用及其比较等级是否正确; 8、冠词。取舍与选择是否正确 9、连词和从句引导词 10、非谓语动词的形式是否正确 二、命题趋势 词法错误、句法错误和行文逻辑 1.一致关系:包括主谓一致、时态一致、代词指代一致等。例如第8题,考查代词指代一致。整篇文章采用的是第二人称的角度。而且前面提到了she和her father。故将We改为They。 2.平行结构:包括动词与动词相配,形容词与形容词相配,分词与分词相配,不定式与不定式相配等。常由并列连词或词组连接。如:and, or , but,neither…nor…, as well as 等.例如第10题,energetic和active两个形容词,意义相近,应该是并列关系而不是转折关系,因此将but改为and。 3. 非谓语动词的用法:如to的省略,过去分词与现在分词的误用等。 4.多余词:常常是介词、副词等的多余。例如第5题,on Sunday在周末;in the morning在早上;on Sunday morning在周末早上,不需要the。故去掉Sunday前面的the。 5.词性的混用。 6.行文逻辑判断等 三、注意事项: (一)改前通读全文, 切忌拿来就改,这一步很关键。这一步的目标是了解短文的中心意思,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑。记叙文强调时间、地点、人物和事件四要素,在通读全文理解全文的同时把一些比较容易的或是明显的错误先改好 (二)分句阅读,逐行找错。在纠错时要仔细地读懂每一个句子,这时就要对文中的词法、句法和语篇(详见考查要点)角度着重分析和特别注意。把涉及 到以上错误类型的词多斟酌一下。 (三)做将答案放回原文,再重读全文。其目的主要是查看有无不符合逻辑,语句不通畅,不符合英语习惯的问题。 考点:考查短文改错。
复制答案
考点分析:
相关试题推荐

阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

Over the years I've been teaching children about a simple 1.___________ powerful concept --- the ant philosophy (哲学).I think everybody should study ants.

They have an2.___________(amaze) four-part philosophy, and here is the first part: ants never quit. That's a good philosophy. If they're heading somewhere and you try to stop them, they'll look for 3.__________way. They'll climb over, they'll climb under, and they'll climb around. They never quit looking for a way to get where they 4.__________ (suppose) to go.

Second, ants think winter all summer. That's an important viewpoint. You can't be so naive ( 天真的) as to think summer will last forever. So ants are gathering in their winter food in the middle of summer and make5.___________(prepare) for the long cold winter. You’ve got to think storms when it’s fine. You've got to think rocks as you enjoy the sand and sun. Think ahead.

The third part of the ant philosophy is that ants think summer all winter. That is so important. During the winter, ants remind6._____________, "This won't last long. We'll soon be out of here." And on the first warm day, the ants are out. 7.___________ it turns cold again, they'll dive back down, but then they come out on the first warm day. They can't wait to get out.

And here's the last part of the ant philosophy. How much will 8.____________ ant gather during the summer to prepare for the winter? All he9. _____________ (possible) can. What an incredible philosophy! 10.__________you can learn from the ant philosophy is: Never give up, look ahead, stay positive and do all you can.

 

查看答案

完形填空

阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出最佳选项,并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。

I had just picked up my new car, a very beautiful automobile if you’re into cars. A few months later, I was involved in an ________  . That new and very beautiful car was destroyed.

It was clearly not my ________  . The other guy was so busy on his cell phone that he went right through a red light and knocked into the passenger side of my car. It was even    ________  because my niece was asleep on the back seat and her father, my brother, was in the front passenger seat. He was not ________, to say the least.

The police arrived and began taking statements. I  ________ that my speed had been up to about 55kmph. “So you were going about 50kmph…” he said.

“No, I said I was doing about 55kmph,” I said.

“Right, so you were doing about 50kmph…” again he  ________  .

In a slightly  ________ tone because I felt I wasn’t being heard, I said: “No! I was doing about 55kmph!”

“OK, if that’s  ________  you want it,” this time the officer simply replied.

I didn’t  ________ it at the time, but I was shooting myself in the foot. My insurance company paid me for the damages to my car.  ________  , I totally missed the boat on the other driver’s insurance company.

The city speed limit is 50km. I  ________ getting 50 percent less than I would have from the other guy’s insurance company because I had ________I was doing 55km.

It suddenly ________me that the traffic policeman had been trying to help me out. He hadn’t ________  about the 5kmph; he had known  ________ about the insurance that I had not.

I thought about what had  ________ over and over again. I might have carried on insisting that I told the ________ , but I could at least have said “Thank you” to him   ________  acting so rudely. After all, he had been trying to help me out.

Sometimes the  ________ thing to do is to let other people talk while you simply shut up and listen. Never forget --- to  ________ , you have to be able to listen.

1.A. accident           B. event         C. incident        D. exam

2.A. effort             B. fault         C. attempt         D. intention

3.A. luckier            B. angrier       C. scarier         D. sadder

4.A. frightened         B. nervous      C. happy           D. worried

5.A. argued           B. explained    C. shouted         D. introduced

6.A. reminded         B. required      C. resisted       D. repeated

7.A. contented          B. surprised     C. puzzled        D. annoyed

8.A. the speed          B. the result    C. the fact       D. the way

9.A. believe            B. imagine       C. realize        D. think

10.A. However          B. Therefore    C. Besides         D. Furthermore

11.A. gave up           B. ended up     C. took up        D. made up

12.A. thought           B. said         C. insisted       D. suggested

13.A. turned            B. struck       C. occurred       D. came

14.A. talked            B. found         C. minded         D. noticed

15.A. something         B. nothing      C. anything       D. everything

16.A. remained          B. happened     C. passed         D. ended

17.A. reality           B. course       C. truth           D. cause

18.A. more than        B. instead of    C. regardless of  D. other than

19.A. happiest          B. easiest      C. worst          D. hardest

20.A. hear              B. learn        C. say            D. Think

 

查看答案

根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项,选项中有两项为多余选项。

Home on the Way

People need homes. Children assume their parents’ place as home. Boarders call school “home” on weekdays. Married couples work together to build new homes and travelers have no place to call “home”, at least for a few nights. 1.? Don’t they have the right to a home? Of course they do.

Some regular travelers take their own belongings like bed sheets, pillowcases and family photos to make them feel like home no matter where they are. Some stay for long periods in the same hotel and as a result become very familiar with service and attendants. 2. .Furthermore, driving a camping car during one’s travels and sleeping in the vehicle at night is just like home—only mobile!

And how about keeping relationships while in transit(运输中)? 3.. Some send letters and postcards, or even photos. Others may just call and say Hi just to let their friends know that they’re still alive and well. People find ways to keep in touch. Making friends on the way helps travelers feel more or less at home. 4..

Nowadays, fewer people are working in their local towns, so how do they develop a sense of belonging? Whenever we step out of our local boundaries, there is always another “home” waiting to be found. 5. , we can make the place we stay “home”.

A. Hostels(招待所) provide a clean safe place to stay while you are travelling the world

B. Others may simply put some flowers by the hotel window to make things more homely

C. Backpackers in youth hostels may become very good friends,even closer than siblings(手足)

D. So how about people who have to travel for extended periods of time

E. No matter where you go in the world,hotels are there,too

F. Some keep contact with their friends via Internet

G. Wherever we are,with just a little bit of effort and imagination

 

查看答案

Children’s lives have changed greatly over the last 50 years. But do they have a happier childhood than you or I did?

It’s difficult to look back on one’s own childhood without some element of nostalgia(怀旧的). I have four brothers and sisters, and my memories are all about being with them, playing board games on the living room floor, or spending days in the street with the other neighborhood children, racing up and down on our bikes, or exploring the nearby woods. My parents scarcely appear in these memories, except as providers either of meals or of severe blame after some particularly risky adventure.

These days, in the UK at least, the nature of childhood has changed dramatically. Firstly, families are smaller. It is common for both parents to work outside the home and there is the feeling that there just isn’t time to bring up a large family, or that no one could possibly afford to have more than one child. As a result, today’s boys and girls spend much of their time alone. Another major change is that youngsters today tend to spend a huge amount of their free time at home, inside. This is due to the fact that parents worry far more than they used to about real or imagined dangers, so they wouldn’t dream of letting their children play outside by themselves.

Finally, the kind of toys children have and the way they play is totally different. Computer and video games have replaced the board games and more interesting activities of my childhood. The irony(讽刺) is that so many ways of playing games are called “interactive”. The fact that you can play electronic games on your own further increases the sense of loneliness felt by many young people today.

Do these changes mean that children today have a less relaxing childhood than I had? I personally believe that they do, but perhaps every generation feels exactly the same.

1.What is the purpose of the direct question given in the first paragraph?

A. To get people’s attention and lead in the topic.

B. To gather people’s opinions on childhood.

C. To show who the passage is written for.

D. To compare the childhood lives of two generations.

2.Which is NOT a reason for the changes?

A. Families are smaller today.

B. Parents worried too much about their children.

C. Toys can be played by children alone at home.

D. It’s too dangerous to play outside.

3.What has the writer focused on in the fourth paragraph?

A. Young people today shouldn’t play electronic games.

B. Some games that young people play today aren’t really good.

C. Computer and video games have replaced the board games.

D. Board games are much more interesting than computer games.

4.The writer’s attitude towards the childhood changing is ________ .

A. approving   B. unconcerned

C. objective  D.optimistic

 

查看答案

“OK,” I said to my daughter as she bent over her afternoon bowl of rice. “What’s going on with you and your friend J.? ” J. is the leader of a group of third-graders at her camp—a position Lucy herself occupied the previous summer. Now she’s the one on the outs. and every day at snack time, she tells me all about it, while I offer the unhelpful advice all summer long.

“She’s fond of giving orders, “Lucy complained. “She’s turning everyone against me. She’s mean. And she’s fat.” “Excuse me,” I said, struggling for calm. “What did you just say?” “She’s fat.” Lucy mumbled (含糊地说). “We’re going upstairs,” I said, my voice cold. “We’re going to discuss this.” And up we went. I’d spent the nine years since her birth getting ready for this day, the day we’d have the conversation about this horrible word. I knew exactly what to say to the girl on the receiving end of the teasing, but in all of my imaginings, it never once occurred to me that my daughter would be the one who used the F word—Fat.

My daughter sat on her bed, and I sat beside her. “How would you feel if someone made fun of you for something that wasn’t your fault?” I began. “She could stop eating so much,” Lucy mumbled, mouthing the simple advice a thousand doctors have given overweight women for years.

“It’s not always that easy,” I said. “Everyone’s different in terms of how they treat food.” Lucy looked at me, waiting for me to go on. I opened my mouth, then closed it. Should I tell her that, in teasing a woman’s weight, she’s joined the long tradition of critics? Should I tell her I didn’t cry when someone posted my picture and commented, “I’m sorry, but aren’t authors who write books marketed to young women supposed to be pretty?”

Does she need to know, now, that life isn’t fair? I feel her eyes on me, waiting for an answer I don’t have. Words are my tools. Stories are my job. It’s possible she’ll remember what I say forever, and I have no idea what to say.

So I tell her the only thing I can come up with that is absolutely true. I say to my daughter, “I love you, and there is nothing you could ever do to make me not love you. But I’m disappointed in you right now. There are plenty of reasons for not liking someone. What she looks like isn’t one of them.”

Lucy nods, tears on her cheeks. “I won’t say that again,” she tells me, and I pull her close, pressing my nose against her hair. As we sit there together, I pray for her to be smart and strong. I pray for her to find friends, work she loves, a partner who loves her. And still, always, I pray that she will never struggle as I’ve struggled, that weight will never be her cross to bear. She may not be able to use the word in our home, but I can use in my head. I pray that she will never get fat.

1.Why does the author want to discuss with Lucy?

A. Because she wants to offer some other helpful advice.

B. Because she is really shocked at Lucy’s rudeness.

C. Because she has prepared the conversation for nine years.

D. Because she decides to tell Lucy a similar story of her own.

2.What does the author want to tell her daughter?

A. It is not easy to take the doctors’ advice to eat less.

B. People shouldn’t complain because life is unfair.

C. People shouldn’t be blamed for their appearance.

D. She herself was once laughed at for her appearance.

3.It can be inferred from the passage that_______.

A. the author earns a living by writing stories.

B. the author is a fat but good-looking woman.

C. the author will stop loving her daughter for what she said.

D. the author’s daughter agreed with her from the very beginning.

4.The author’s attitude towards her daughter can be best described as _______.

A. satisfied and friendly           B. indifferent but patient

C. loving but strict                D. unsatisfied and angry

 

查看答案
试题属性

Copyright @ 2008-2019 满分5 学习网 ManFen5.COM. All Rights Reserved.