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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加;在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除;把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意;1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Tom and Alice were both patient in a Mental Hospital. One day they were walking by the swimming pool of the hospital while Tom suddenly jumped into the deep end. He sank to the bottom. Alice promptly jumped in to save him with any hesitation. She swam to the bottom and pull him out. When the medical director became aware Alice’s heroic act, he immediate reviewed her file and called her into his office. “Alice, I have a good news and bad news for you. The good news is that you’re being discharged because since you were able to save the life of other patient, I think you’ve gained your senses. The bad news is that Tom, that you saved, hanged himself with his bathrobe(浴衣)belt in the bathroom, and he was dead.”

Alice replied, “He didn’t hang him. I hung him up to dry.”

 

1.patient改为patients 2.while改为when 3.with改为without 4.pull改为pulled 5.aware后面加of 6.immediate改为immediately 7.删去good前面的a 8.other改为another 9.that改为whom/who 10.him改为himself 【解析】 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 【名师点睛】 短文改错答题技巧 一、高考英语改错题的常见错误类型 1、谓语动词的时态和语态 2、句子结构和句子完整性 3、名词单复数及主谓一致问题 4、上下文语意和代词 5、介词 固定搭配 6、固定(习惯)用法 7、形容词和副词是否误用及其比较等级是否正确; 8、冠词。取舍与选择是否正确 9、连词和从句引导词 10、非谓语动词的形式是否正确 二、命题趋势 词法错误、句法错误和行文逻辑 1.一致关系:包括主谓一致、时态一致、代词指代一致等。例如第1题,考查主谓一致,这一句的主语是Tom and Alice,是两个人,并且patient是可数名词。故将patient改为patients。 2.平行结构:包括动词与动词相配,形容词与形容词相配,分词与分词相配,不定式与不定式相配等。常由并列连词或词组连接。如:and, or , but,neither…nor…, as well as 等. 3. 非谓语动词的用法:如to的省略,过去分词与现在分词的误用等。 4.多余词或缺少词:常常是介词、副词等的多余或缺少。 5.词性的混用。 6.行文逻辑判断等 三、注意事项: (一)改前通读全文, 切忌拿来就改,这一步很关键。这一步的目标是了解短文的中心意思,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑。记叙文强调时间、地点、人物和事件四要素,在通读全文理解全文的同时把一些比较容易的或是明显的错误先改好 (二)分句阅读,逐行找错。在纠错时要仔细地读懂每一个句子,这时就要对文中的词法、句法和语篇(详见考查要点)角度着重分析和特别注意。把涉及 到以上错误类型的词多斟酌一下。 (三)做将答案放回原文,再重读全文。其目的主要是查看有无不符合逻辑,语句不通畅,不符合英语习惯的问题。 考点:考查短文改错
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