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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn how to stop wasted water. One

of the step that we should take is to find ways of reusing them. Today in the most large cities, fresh water

is used only once and then it runs in a waste system. But it is possibly to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, when the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can be reused. But even if every large city purified and reused it’s water, we still would have enough water.

 

1.was改为is 2.wasted改为wasting 3.step改为steps 4.them改为it 5.in the most large去掉the 6.in改为into 7.possibly改为possible 8.when改为where 9.it’s改为its 10.would后加not 【解析】 1.was改为is;考查动词时态。整篇文章讲述的是现在的情况,所以要用一般现在时。故将was改为is。 2.wasted改为wasting;考查动词stop的用法。stop doing停止做正在做的事;stop to do 停下正在做的事去做另外一件事。这里的句意是:我们不得不去学习怎样停止浪费水资源。故将wasted改为wasting。 3.step改为steps;考查名词复数。one of +名词复数,表示…中之一。故将step改为steps。 4.them改为it;考查代词。这一句的句意:其中的一个步骤就是要拒绝浪费用水。这里的代词应该是代指浪费用水这一件事情,them是复数。故将them改为it。 5.in the most large去掉the;考查冠词的用法。most表示最高级时前面才需要加定冠词the,而此处是“大多数”的意思,故将the去掉。 6.in改为into;考查介词的用法。in是表示的动作位置的静态介词,表示“在…里面”;而into是表示动作方向的动态介词,表示“到…里面去”,常与表示动作的动词(如:come, go, run, rush等)连用,故将in改为into。 7.possibly改为possible;考查系动词的用法。is是系动词,后面一般接名词,形容词等。possibly是副词。故将possibly改为possible。 8.when改为where;考查非限制性定语从句。先行词factory是一个地点名词,所以应该用地点关系副词where来引导定语从句。故将when改为where。 9.it’s改为its;考查代词。every large city purified and reused it’s water,句意:每个大城市都净化并且重新利用它的废水。it’s是it is的缩写形式,故将it’s改为its。 10.would后加not;根据上文内容可知此处说的是将来没有水来利用,表示否定意思,故在would后加not。 【名师点睛】 短文改错答题技巧 一、高考英语改错题的常见错误类型 1、谓语动词的时态和语态 2、句子结构和句子完整性 3、名词单复数及主谓一致问题 4、上下文语意和代词 5、介词 固定搭配 6、固定(习惯)用法 7、形容词和副词是否误用及其比较等级是否正确; 8、冠词。取舍与选择是否正确 9、连词和从句引导词 10、非谓语动词的形式是否正确 二、命题趋势 词法错误、句法错误和行文逻辑 1. 一致关系:包括主谓一致、时态一致、代词指代一致等。 2.平行结构:包括动词与动词相配,形容词与形容词相配,分词与分词相配,不定式与不定式相配等。常由并列连词或词组连接。如:and, or , but,neither…nor…, as well as 等. 3. 非谓语动词的用法:如to的省略,过去分词与现在分词的误用等。 4.多余词或者缺词:常常是介词、副词等的多余或缺少。 例如第5题,考查冠词的用法。most表示最高级时前面才需要加定冠词the,而此处是“大多数”的意思,故将the去掉。 5.词性的混用。 6.行文逻辑判断等 三、注意事项: (一)改前通读全文, 切忌拿来就改,这一步很关键。这一步的目标是了解短文的中心意思,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑。记叙文强调时间、地点、人物和事件四要素,在通读全文理解全文的同时把一些比较容易的或是明显的错误先改好 (二)分句阅读,逐行找错。在纠错时要仔细地读懂每一个句子,这时就要对文中的词法、句法和语篇(详见考查要点)角度着重分析和特别注意。把涉及 到以上错误类型的词多斟酌一下。 (三)做将答案放回原文,再重读全文。其目的主要是查看有无不符合逻辑,语句不通畅,不符合英语习惯的问题。 考点:考查短文改错
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