Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一个横线（____），并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. A woman tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum(流浪汉)in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb.

Answer

1.去掉so

2.her—him

3.say—said

4.in后面加the

5.passing—passed

6.he后面加was

7.immediate—immediately

8.or—and

9.mile—miles

10.in—with

【解析】

1.去掉so 考查连词。因为他不想付钱，所以躲在厕所里面，前面有because引导的原因状语从句，后面是主句，去掉so

2.her—him 考查代词。文章的开始说的是a man一位男士

3.say—said 考查动词的时态。文章第一句是once曾经，由此可知是过去的事情

4.in后面加the 考查冠词。这里是指公交车上的厕所，所以应为特指。in后面加the

5.passing—passed 考查动词的语态。这里是指消息被传递，故应用动词的被动语态，被传递的意思

6.he后面加was 考查被动语态。公共汽车司机被告知车上有个炸弹。表示被动含义

7.immediate—immediately 考查副词。本句中是用来修饰动词stop的，修饰动词应用副词

8.or—and 考查连词。告诉乘客下车并且要离车远一点儿，是顺承关系

9.mile—miles 考查名词的复数。15 miles应用复数形式，mile—miles

10.—with 考查固定短语。在某人的帮助下，短语为with the help of="with" one’s help

考点 ：短文改错。