Question

“双十一”现在已经成为购物的节日，在这天，人们纷纷在网上购物，寻找自己喜爱的商品。以下是关于“双十一”来源和发展，请就此写一篇短文。

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参考词汇：光棍节：SinglesDay电子商务：E-commerce

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1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

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Answer

Double 11，originating from some universities in Nanjing in the 1990s，is called Singles Day in China because it falls on Nov．11by coincidence when many young people will hold many parties to look for the one they love．Since 2011，Double 11 has become the symbol of E-commerce，when people can buy lots of things they like at a low price．But，at the same time ，people might buy some products they don’t need at all or buy something with a high price but in low quality．What’s worse，there are always lots of complaints and they may therefore get annoyed for this．In my opinion，though shopping online on that day brings consumers a lot of convenience，they should be reasonable and buy in the shop with a good reputation in case of being cheated．

【解析】本文是一篇提纲作文，要求以所给的提示写一篇短文。根据提示的信息可知，文章应写成记叙文，文章用第三人称，时态以一般现在时为主。写作时要充分发挥想象，适当的添加自己的观点，使文章内容丰满，并达到要求的字数。此外，为了提高文章档次，还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇，并添加关联词让行文流畅。

本篇书面表达格式规范，语言流畅。五个句子涵盖了所有的要点，符合题目的要求。本文的亮点是运用了复杂的句式如定语从句，宾语从句、状语从句和被动语态等，提升了文章的档次；现在分词作状语、what'smore、incaseof．等结构的运用也为文章增添了亮色。