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短文改错

文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.允许修改10 处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。

Dear Sally,

It feels such a long time since last time I see you. So far my summer in Xiamen has been great! I spent all my weekends at the beach. I am getting a nice tan(黝黑) and you can not longer say I am paler than you . I’ve been playing lots of beach volleyballs, and just this passed weekend I got the first place in a match! On weekends I work in a club which I teach kids to draw. Although the pay isn’t high, but I love the job very much, because I like drawing and I love kids a lot. I hope the summer’s been going good for you too. There is only one month left in the summer vacation and after that it’s time to school. Would you like to meet up some time before school starting? I want to share with you the photos I’ve taken. I’ll give you call when I return home. See you soon!

Love,

Mary

 

1.see改为saw 2.not改为no 3.volleyballs改为volleyball 4.passed改为past 5.which改为where 6.删除but 7.good改为well 8.to改为for 9.starting改为starts 10.you后加a 【解析】 试题分析: 1.改为saw 考查时态。句意:自从上次见到你到现在似乎已经很长时间了。since引导的时间状语从句叙述的是过去发生的事情,所以使用一般过去时。 2.改为no 考查固定结构。短语no longer不再,相当于not...any longer。 3.改为volleyball 考查名词单复数。名词短语beach volleyball沙滩排球,这是一个运动项目,不要使用复数形式。 4.改为past 考查形容词。形容词past过去的,在句中充当定语修饰名词。短语this past weekend意为“在过去的这个周末”。句意:在过去的这个周末,我在比赛中赢得了第一名。 5.改为where 考查定语从句。本题定语从句的先行词是a club,后面的定语从句句子结构很完整,所以使用关系副词where引导这个定语从句,where在句中充当地点状语。 6.删除but 考查连词。连词although和but是不能连用的,因为这两个词都属于从属连词,都要引导从句。 7.改为well 考查副词。本句中副词well充当状语修饰谓语动词have been going,而形容词在英语中是不能做状语的。 8.改为for 考查固定句式。句式It's time for ...是....的时候了;还可以写成It's time to do sth是做某事的时候了。 9.改为starts 考查时态。本句是before引导的时间状语从句,从句中使用一般现在时代替将来时。所以把starting改为starts。 10.后加a 考查冠词。本句中的call是一个名词,give sb a call给某人一个电话。句意:当我回家的时候,我会给你一个电话。 【名师点睛】 短文改错还可以从以下角度着手判断: 1. 主谓一致性:第三人称单数漏掉s,或主语为复数,谓语动词用了单数;再就是就近原则对主语的影响。 2. 冠词:定冠词the的多余或缺失,如季节,月份,星期,球类及三餐活动,称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the,或是same等常和the一起使用的词却漏税掉了the;a, an的混用,特别注意:hour, honest等虽然首字母不是元音字母,但其发音却是以元音素开头,故用an,而useful, university, European, one—hour等虽然首字母是元音字母,但却以辅音音素开头,故用a。 如1:and sports center has been built in their place. (2009全国卷I)在此sports前应加a。 sports center是可数名词单数,表示不确定。 如:The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. (2009浙江卷)在此a改为an;由umbrella的发音可知以元音因素开头,应用an。 3. 数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用,如分数的分子大于一时分母没有用复数等,基数词的复数形式如几百hundreds of,几千thousands of漏掉了s,或是当其前有具体数字或several时加了复数,如seven hundred,写作seven hundreds。 4. 连词:不合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词(如but)的时候用了承接连词(so),或相反等等。 例1: This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to somebody else.(2009.浙江卷)在此and改为but,前后构成转折,用but。 5. 代词:主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格,主格或相反,关系代词的错用或缺失。如只能用that引导的用了其它,或在不能用that的地方却用了that,或是在“介词+关系代词”结构中漏掉了介词等。 例1:The factory …… has been moved out of the city, and a sports center has been built in their place. (2009全国卷I) 此处their 改为 its。 因为前文中提到了名词The factory是单数,因此把their改为its。 例2:one day I saw a second—hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan.(2009辽宁卷)把that改为which,非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which不能用that。 6. 常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错。 例:It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expecting anything in return.(2009浙江卷)在possible后加to。由 It is/was possible(或其他形容词)+ to do sth.固定句型决定。 考点:考查短文改错
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