Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Everyone has a dream. We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or tough. As Senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three year, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only had I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxiety and pressure did discourage from me at times and with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it.

I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter what challenging it is, I will make it come true. As the proverb said, “Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”

Answer

1.achieve → achieving

2.Senior前加 a

3.year → years

4.that → what

5.had → have

6.去掉from

7.and→ but

8.has → is

9.what → how

10.said → says

【解析】

试题分析：

1.achieve → achieving achieve→ achieving。on the way to doing sth.表示"在做……的过程中", to是介词,后接动名词。

2.Senior前加 a 这里指"作为一名高三学生",应用不定冠词表泛指。故在Senior前加 a。

3.year → years 此处指"在过去的三年里",故用year的复数形式。故把year → years。

4.that → what 这里what引导宾语从句并充当其宾语,that只起连接作用。故把that → what。

5.had → have Not only...but also连接两个并列的分句,第二个分句用了现在完成时,结合语境,第一个分句也应用现在完成时。

6.去掉from discourage sb. 表示"使某人灰心丧气"。故去掉from。

7.and→ but 前后句逻辑上构成转折关系,故把and→ but。

8.has → is There be...句型表示客观存在,be不能换为have。故把has → is。

9.what → how no matter how表示"无论如何……,不管怎么……",后接形容词、副词,相当于however。故把what → how。

10.said → says 本句是客观事实,故用一般现在时。As the proverb says, "Where there’s a will, there’s a way."常言道:"有志者,事竟成。"

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