Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Yesterday, I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school. I was about to help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knocking her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time, another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.

As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people are becoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made my mind that I will reach out my hand without hesitation next time.

Answer

1.the--an

2.while --when

3.stop--stopped

4.Heard—Hearing

5.that --who

6.thank—thanks

7.help--helping

8.immorally--immoral

9.删掉to

10.made后面加up

【解析】

试题分析：文章讲述作者在匆忙上学的路上看见一个老太太跌倒，想帮忙却被过路人劝住了，但是另外一名学生上去帮忙，他感到很羞愧，决心下次一定要伸出手。

1.the--an 昨天我在匆忙上学的路上看见一个老太太跌倒。这里是泛指“一个老太太”，the改成 an

2.while –when 我刚要把她扶起来，这时一个过路人拦住了我。这里使用了：be about to do…when…，刚要做…这时…，while 改成when

3.stop—stopped 因为讲述的是昨天的事情，所以用一般过去式：stop改成stopped

4.Heard—Hearing 听到这个话，我开始犹豫，放慢步伐。这里用现在分词做状语：Heard改成 Hearing

5.that –who 同时，看见一切发生的另外一名学生上去帮忙。这里是非限制性定语从句，不能用that 改成who

6.thank—thanks 老太太除了感谢这个男孩，什么也没有说。我感到很羞愧。Thank一般用复数，改成thanks

7.help—helping 帮助别人永远是美德。这里是动名词做主语：help改成 helping

8.immorally—immoral 即使一些老人不道德；用形容词做表语：immorally改成 immoral

9.删掉to 我们不能让它消失。Let sb do sth，用省略to的不定式。去掉to

10.

【名师点拨】

动词不定式作宾语补足语

1. 带to的动词不定式作宾语补足语

encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事；want sb. to do 想让某人做某事；invite sb. to do邀请某人做某事； ask sb. to do 请求某人做某事；order sb. to do命令某人做某事； tell sb. to do告诉某人做某事；force sb. to do 强迫某人做某事；allow sb. to do允许某人做某事； forbid sb. to do 禁止某人做某事；persuade sb. to do 劝说某人做某事。

2.不带to 的动词不定式作宾语补足语

have/make/see/watch/hear/let/notice/observe/feel/look at/listen to sb. do sth.

注意：help sb. (to) do sth.

温馨提示：不带to 的动词不定式作宾语补足语，但是变成被动语态时要把to加上。He made me feel at home. （主动语态）I was made to feel at home.（被动语态）

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