Question

书面表达

假设你是李华，上周你班就中学生是否应该用互联网学习英语进行了讨论。请你给二十一世纪英语报写一封信，介绍不同观点，并发表自己的看法。

要点包括：

1.赞成:下载资料、分享经验、听歌、看电影

2.反对:浪费时间精力、沉迷游戏、聊天

3.你的观点

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．信的开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：沉迷：be addicted to

Dear Editor，

Last week, our class had a discussion about

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Editor,

Last week, our class had a discussion about whether high school students should use the Internet to learn English. We held different views about it.

Some people agree with the idea, saying that they can download the latest English information from the Internet. What’s more, they cannot only share their experience of learning English with others, but also watch English films and listen to English songs.

However, others who are against say that it is a waste of time and energy. Besides, it is easy for the students to be addicted to the online games or chatting with others rather than learning English.

In my opinion, we can benefit a lot with the Internet if we can use it properly in learning English.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇信件类的文章，信件的主要内容是关于对利用互联网学习英语这个话题的观点。本文条理清楚，结构明显主要分成四大块。第一部分：介绍了英语课上就此话题所讨论的情况；第二部分：同意利用互联网学习英语的观点及原因；第三部分：不同意此观点的原因；第四部分：作者个人的看法。文章脉络分明，字数控制妥当，并且紧扣文章所给信息进行展开论述。

【亮点点拨】

本文是一篇议论文形式的信件，文章条理清晰，整体上给评委老师一个良好的印象，不拖泥带水，凝结成块，干净利索。通读下来简单流畅，其中有些句子值得我们记录并加以运用。如：Some people agree with the idea, saying that they can download the latest English information from the Internet，这里运用到了动名词的手法，people和say之间构成主动关系；they cannot only share their experience of learning English with others, but also watch English films and listen to English songs此句中，not only…but also的运用，也是恰到好处。当然如果你有记笔记的习惯，其中的一些美词也可作适当记录，如：What’s more，In my opinion，Besides等等。都是值得我们学习并运用的点。