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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It was dinner time. Mr and Mrs Smith were about to begin their dinner then they find that their son, Mike, wasn’t there. So Mrs Smith asked her husband to go and find him. Mr Smith went to Mike’s room and found Mike laying on the floor, read a book. He was laughing! Mr Smith told him to go for dinner, and he left quite unwilling. Wondering that what attracted his son so much, Mr Smith took a look at the book. Now Mrs Smith and Mike were at the table,waiting Mr Smith. She got quite patient and sent her son for his father. Mike went back to his room. To his great surprised, he saw his father sitting on the floor, reading the same storybook of hers on the floor!

 

1.then →when. 2.find →found. 3.laying →lying. 4.read →reading. 5.unwilling →unwillingly. 6.去掉Wondering后面的that. 7.waiting后加for. 8.patient →impatient. 9.surprised →surprise. 10.hers →his. 【解析】 试题分析:文章讲述了一本不仅让儿子痴迷不吃饭而且也让父亲痴迷不吃饭的书。 1.then →when.考查固定句式。“be about to do sth. when...”是固定句型,意为“正要做某事突然……”。此处指正要吃晚饭时突然发现儿子没在。故then →when. 2.find →found. 考查时态。文章讲述的是发生在过去的事情全文是过去时,该句也要用一般过去时态。故find →found. 3.laying →lying. 考查非谓语动词。该题考查“find+宾语+宾语补足语”结构。Mike和lie之间是主动关系,lay意为“放置,搁置,产卵”。lie意为“躺”,其现在分词形式为lying。此处指Mike躺在地上,故laying →lying. 4.read →reading. 考查非谓语动词。“read a book”是伴随状语。Mike和read之间是主动关系,要用现在分词。故read →reading. 5.unwilling →unwillingly. 考查副词。此处修饰动词left用副词,指“不愿意离开”故unwilling →unwillingly. 6.去掉Wondering后面的that. 考查名词性从句。“what absorbed his son so much”是wonder的宾语从句,从句缺少主语,故用what引导从句。that多余,应去掉。 7.waiting后加for. 考查介词。Wait是不及物动词,和介词for搭配,“wait for sb. ”意为“等待某人”。故waiting后加for. 8.patient →impatient. 考查句意理解。由语境可知,Mrs Smith不耐烦了,所以她让儿子去找爸爸。patient意为“有耐心的”,根据句意,要将patient改为其反义词“impatient”。故patient →impatient. 9.surprised →surprise. 考查名词。“to one’s +n.”意为“令某人感到……的是” “to one’s surprise”意为“令某人感到惊讶的是”。to是介词,后面要跟名词。surprised是形容词,故surprised →surprise. 10.hers →his. 考查代词。该处指Tom的书,Tom是男性,故hers →his. 【名师点睛】 短文改错答题技巧: 高中英语短文改错题具有“高起点、低落点”的特点,对学生的语言感觉和语言能力要求较高,但改正的错误往往比较简单。很多学生做不好改错题不是因为没有掌握这些语法知识,而是不能通过语感找出错误。所以培养学生有意识地去注意一些高考短文改错的常考点非常重要。 一、查时态是否一致 时态错误几乎是每年短文改错中必设的改错题。要有目的地去检查文中的每一个谓语动词的时态与上下文、语境以及该句的时间状语是否相符和一致。比如67小题考查时态。文章讲述的是发生在过去的事情全文是过去时,该句也要用一般过去时态。故find →found. 二、查主谓是否一致 在检查谓语动词的时态和语态是否正确的同时,还要注意检查该动词在人称和数上是否与主语保持了一致。 主谓语一致的情况较为复杂,考生平时学习要留心归纳。有些特殊句式的主谓一致问题很容易被忽视,如倒装句、关系代词在定语从句中做主语的情况等,答题时要高度重视。 三、查指代是否一致 对于短文中出现的每一个代词都要查一下它所指代的内容以及在句中的作用,注意其数、格、词性是否正确和前后一致,包括人称代词、指示代词、反身代词、关系代词以及疑问代词等。指代错误也是高考改错题中常设的改错题。第75小题考查代词。该处指Tom的书,Tom是男性,故hers →his. 四、查平行结构是否平行一致 由and,or,but,either…or…,neither…nor…,not only …but also…,as well as等并列连词和词 组连接的结构可称为平行结构。平行结构在词性、时态、非谓语动词的形式上往往要求前后一致。答题时要留心平行结构前后是否对等平行,这也是常设的错误。 五、查名词的单复数与修饰词语或上下文是否一致 名词数的错误也是高考常设的改错题。要查一下名词是否可数,与其修饰语是否一致。 六、查行文逻辑是否一致 查这方面的错误应从文章整体内容出发,通篇考虑,以行为单位是难以发现这种错误的。逻辑不一致主要是由肯定与否定、关联词语以及动词(如come与go,take与bring)的误用所造成的,应多从这方面去查找。如第73小题考查句意理解。由语境可知,Mrs Smith不耐烦了,所以她让儿子去找爸爸。patient意为“有耐心的”,根据句意,要将patient改为其反义词“impatient”。故patient →impatient. 总之,短文改错要注意联系上下文和时态的变化,做题时应以句子为单位,同时兼顾改错的原则。这个原则就是不能改变原意,不能轻易去掉动词、名词等实词,去掉的通常是固定搭配结构中多余的部分。同样,增加的词也是固定搭配中缺少的部分或者是定语从句中的先行词或介词。短文改错中名词的错误多是可数名词和不可数名词的混用;形容词的错误一般是比较级和最高级的混用;副词的错误一般来说是该用副词的地方用成了形容词。 做好短文改错题,可以从以下三方面去考虑: 1.快速阅读短文,如抓住中心思想,从整体上对短文有个了解。不了解全文,很难判断如时态和代词的相关错误。 2.充分运用语言的基础知识,从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发,进行分析判断,尽快找出错误在何处。 3.重视整体和语境,从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组,判断是递进关系还是转折关系,是因果关系还是让步关系。 答题时请从以下几点着眼: 1.句中的时态、主谓、代词一致吗? 2.句中的谓语完整吗? 3.习惯用法固定搭配正确吗? 4.冠词、形容词、副词及关系词得当吗? 5.该用被动语态吗? 6.从句的连接词对了吗? 7.从句中的谓语完整吗?
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