Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As is known to us all, only before experiencing pains and failures in life can we really grow up good and mature physically and mentally. Once I was among the top student in my class, but later I suffered from serious disease, which almost cost my life. Luckily, I was survived. But I fell behind your fellow classmates due to missing too much lessons. But I was in despair. Then in came my head teacher, who encouraged me to study hard, convinced me that a rainbow only came after rain. And now with great efforts I have made progress.

Answer

1.before—after

2.good---well

3.student---students

4. serious 前加a

5.was survived 的was去掉

6.your—my

7.much—many

8.But—So

9.convinced---convincing

10.came---comes

【解析】

1.before—after 考查逻辑关系。根据语境可知，我们只有在经历过不好的事情之后才会懂得珍惜更好的生活，故改为after。

2.good---well考查宾语。Up是介词后面的跟宾语，构成介宾结构，故改为well。

3.student---students考查单复数。Among后面的解复数名词，故改为students。

4.serious 前加a考查固定结构。这里泛指一种眼中的疾病，应用冠词a形容，故添加a。

5.was survived 的was去掉考查被动语态。我幸存了是主动关系，不是被动关系，故去掉was。

6.your—my考查主语。这里的主语是我，所以物主代词应用my。

7.much—many考查固定用法。Lessons是可数名词，应用many来形容，故改为many。

8.But—So考查连词。根据上下文分析可知这里构成顺承关系，而不是转折关系，故改为So。

9.convinced---convincing考查动名词。主语我和convince之间构成主动关系，故改为convincing。

10.came---comes考查时态。这里是一般现在是，并且前面主语是单数，故改为comes。

考点：考查词汇和句型的运用。