Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

TuYouyou, together with two other scientists, were awarded the Nobel Prize in Medicine, according to China Daily. Everyone in China deserves to take pride in, for one of the long-held goals we have been dreaming of has been become a reality.

TuYouyou, born on December 30, 1930, is the famous Chinese medical scientist. She has devoted her whole life to study Chinese traditional medicine. His discovery of artemisinin（青蒿素）as well as its benefit in treating malaria(疟疾) is regarded as a breakthrough in tropical medicines. It has great improved health for those in developed countries such as those in South Asia and Africa. Because of her outstanding work, in 2011 TuYouyou received the Lasker Award, what is called “America’s Nobels.”

Answer

1.were---was

2.in后面加上it

3.去掉has 的been

4.the---a

5.study---studying

6.His---Her

7.medicines---medicine

8.great---greatly

9.developed---deceloping

10.what---which

【解析】

1.were---was考查单复数。主语是屠呦呦，是单数，故改为was。

2.考查代词。本句中缺少宾语的成分，用it指代前面的事情，符合语境，故添加it。

3. 的been考查被动语态。梦想和实现之间是主动关系，并没有构成被动关系，故去掉has后面的been。

4.考查冠词。根据语境是一个有名的中国医药学家，这里是并不是特指，故改为a。

5.考查短语用法。Devote to doing意为“奉献做某事”，是固定用法，故改为studying。

6.考查第三人称代词。主语是女性，所以代词应该是her。

7.考查单复数。从前文可知这里讲的是一种药，所以是单数，故改为medicine。

8.考查副词。Greatly用来修饰improved，故改为greatly。

9.developing考查固定结构。Developing country意为“发展中国家”，是固定用法，故改为developing。

10.考查非限制性定语从句。引导词在从句中作主语，并且有逗号隔开，故改为which。

考点：考查句型和语法的运用。