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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Sailor Gutzler was only survivor in a plane crash that killed her family in Eddyville, Kentucky in January 3, 2015. It was reported that the 7­year­old girl has walked about a mile through the cold, dark wood, wearing a short-sleeve shirt, shorts and no shoes in the freezing wind. Bleeding and frightened, she was walking alone while she saw a light in the distance, it led her to Larry Wilkins' home. She was knocked on the door. Wilkins, 71, answered to find a thin, black-haired girl weeping and trembling. Eventual, with the assistance of the old man, she called the police for help. However, the brave girl helped the investigators locate the crashing plane in the right direction.

 

1.was后面加the 2.in改为on 3.has改为had 4.wood改为woods 5.while改为when 6.it改为which 7.去掉was 8.Eventual改为Eventually 9.However改为Therefore 10.crashing改为crashed 【解析】 试题分析: 1.was后面加the 名词survivor前面有only修饰,only表示特指,所以使用定冠词the。 2.in改为on 英语中具体在某一天使用介词on。 3.has改为had 本句叙述的是2015年1月3号之前就发生的事情,所以使用过去完成时。 4.wood改为woods 名词woods指森林;黑色的森林穿着…的衣服,这是一种拟人的修辞手法。 5.while改为when 时间状语从句中的动词是saw,这是一个短暂性动词,不能和while连用。While要和延续性动词连用。When可以和延续性也可以和短暂性动词连用。 6.it改为which 本句是一个非限制性定语从句,which指代先行词light在句中做主语,不能省略。It不能引导定语从句。 7.去掉was 动词短语knock on敲击;本句主语she和knock on之间构成主动关系,所以不需要使用被动语态。 8.Eventual改为Eventually 形容词eventual是不能在句中做状语的,应该使用副词eventually在句中做状语。 9.However改为Therefore 根据句意可知上下文之间是因果关系,而不是转折关系。所以使用副词therefore。 10. 考点:考查短文改错
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