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书面表达 下列表格为某市2005年与2015年人们度假方式的情况比较,请按表格内...

书面表达

下列表格为某市2005年与2015年人们度假方式的情况比较,请按表格内容写一篇120词左右的短文,并对度假方式变化原因加以简要评析。

年度

2005

2015

原因

境外旅游

11%

22%

收入增加

海边度假

38%

31%

海水污染

爬山野营

11%

34%

回归自然

 

注意:1.词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 2005 to 2015.

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

 

One possible version The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 2005 to 2015. The table shows that a greater number of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2015. The rate of 2015 (22%) doubled that of 2005 (11%). We are sure that the number will increase because with their incomes rising, more people can afford the journeys abroad. At the same time, the seaside attracted a lot of people. However, the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 2005 to 31% in 2015, the reason for which lies in the fact that sea water is being polluted. The polluted seaside is likely to drive more visitors away. The year 2015 saw a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping. The rate in 2015 (34%) was more than three times that in 2005 (11%). The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to nature. 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于图表类写作。这是一篇图表作文,本文的关键之一就要注意百分数的表达法。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。 亮点说明:范文中高级句式的运用很到位,如定语从句The reason for which lies in the fact that sea water is being polluted.表语从句The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to nature.倍数表达:The rate in 2015 (34%) was more than three times that in 2005 (11%).在写作时,运用正确的高级句式可以给文章增色很多。 考点:考查图表类写作  
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