Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Friday, Just before the 66^th National Day holiday, I conducted interview with James Watson, a famous American scientist, talk about how to become a successful scientist. On his opinion, to be a scientist, we needed to be very fond of science. What’s most, we have to keep practicing as well as learn from other successful scientist. If we want to be a successful one, besides hard-working, we are supposing to set up for a clear goal as well. James Watson also suggest that every child who is curiously about science should make your effort to realize the dream of becoming a scientist.

Answer

1.conducted后加an

2.talk改为talking

3.On改为in

4.needed改为need

5.most改为more

6.scientist改为scientists

7.supposeing改为supposed

8.去掉for

9.suggest改为suggests

10.your改为their/his

【解析】

试题分析：

1.conducted后加an 考查冠词。名词interview是以元音开始的单词，应该使用不定冠词an修饰。句意：上个星期五，在第66个国庆节之前，我对James Watson进行了一次采访。

2.talk改为talking 考查非谓语动词。本句中动词talk与本句主语I构成主动关系，所以使用现在分词在句中充当状语。

3.On改为in 考查固定搭配。短语in one's opinion在某人看来，根据某人的观点。

4.needed改为need 本句是在陈述他的个人观点，这不是过去发生的事情，而是一直以来他们所持有的观点，所以使用一般现在时即可。

5.most改为more 考查固定搭配。短语what's more而且，该短语在句中表示递进关系。

6.scientist改为scientists 考查名词单复数。句意：而且我们要不断练习还要从其他的那些成功的科学家里学习。根据句意可知成功的科学家有很多，所以使用复数形式scientists。

7.supposeing改为supposed 考查固定搭配。固定短语be supposed to do sth应该做某事，相当于should do sth。

8.去掉for 考查动词短语。短语set up设立，成立；该短语后面可以直接加宾语，不需要介词for。

9.suggest改为suggests 考查谓语动词单复数。本句的主语是James Watson，这是一个单数名词，做主语的时候，谓语动词也应该使用单数形式。

10.

【名师点睛】

1. 谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点，常见动词错误类型有①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;②and前后动词时态不一致;③主谓不一致; ④缺少动词,特别是be动词; ⑤第三人称单数形式错用;⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。

They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies.

(did改为do，错误类型属于①)

As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and toldstories.

(visiting 改为visited, 错误类型属于②)

There will an important game next month. (will后加be,错误类型属于④)

One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.

( was 改为were，错误类型属于③)

2. 名词的常见错误：单复数名词错用，可数名词与不可数名词错用。

I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(subject改为subjects)

Their word were a great encouragement to me.(word改为words)

Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.(knowledges改为knowledge)

3. 连词错误 连词包括关系代词、副词，并列连词and/ or/but等。关于连词，一般考查从句关系who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。

I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. (错用了who的所有格形式，改为whose)

I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.(此处应该是并列的关系而非转折，but改为and) Clever as she is, but she works very hard.(as意为“尽管”，不能再跟but连用，所以去掉but)

考点：考查短文改错