Question

书面表达

假定你是李华，最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语暑期夏令营活动，现就有关事项征求你的意见。请根据下表所提供的信息用英语以书信形式给予答复。请在答题卡上作答。

活动时间	7月16日～22日或8月18日～24日
活动内容	参加英语角  学唱英语歌曲 听英语讲座  表演英语短剧 看英语电影  教外宾学中文
对活动内容的 建议或要求

注意事项：

1. 选择适合你的时间，并说明理由；

2. 选择两项你喜欢的活动，并说明理由；

3. 对活动内容提出至少一个建议或要求；

4. 词数：100左右；

5. 信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Sir or Madame，

I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.

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Thank you very much,

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Sir or Madame,

I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.

I prefer to go in July (from July 16 to July 22) because I’ll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems that all the activities you have offered are very attractive as well as meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American cultures. With the coming of the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know more about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.

It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?

Thank you very much.

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文的难度较大，要求以李华的身份回信表达自己的观点。所以本文使用第一人称和一般现在时。要点：1.选择自己喜欢的会议时间，并说明理由。2.选择自己更愿意参加的两项活动，并说明理由。3.对活动提出至少一个建议或要求。在写作之前，首先要对文章进行谋篇布局，建议分成三段，显得有条理。在表达个人意见的时候，可以建议多传播汉语文化。

【名师点睛】

这篇范文是难得一篇好文章。首先范文布局合理，语言地道，转折流畅。高级短语级句式运用合理丰富。如：It seems that all the activities you have offered are very attractive as well as meaningful.非限制性定语从句. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American cultures.其次文章的过渡句自然，如It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?

考点：考查半开放性作文