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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(满分5 manfen5.com),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下面一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam,

Knowing that our library is going to buy more books, I’d like to give some advices.

What we need most are popular science books, that usually explain basic principles of the nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arousing our curiosity about scientific discoveries.

In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is how I recommend another category of books: literary books. These classic works, writing by great masters , present noble thoughts through fascinating stories and beautifully language. It not only provide us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.

I would appreciate this if you could consider my recommendation.

Yours  sincerely,

Li Hua

 

1.advices改为advice 2.that改为which 3.去掉the 4.arousing改为arouse 5.how改为why 6.writing改为written 7.beautifully改为beautiful 8.It改为They 9.us后面加with 10.this改为it 【解析】 试题分析:本文中作者给出了一些图书馆购书的建议,并解释了为什么建议购买这些书的原因。 1.advices改为advice 考查名词单复数。名词advice建议,是一个不可数名词,没有复数形式。建议:知道图书馆要买更多的书,我们想给一些建议。 2.that改为which 考查定语从句。本句是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词是popular science books, 关系代词which指代先行词在句中作主语。关系代词that是不能引导非限制性定语从句的。 3.去掉the 考查冠词。名词nature自然,这是一个表示抽象含义的名词,要单独使用,不加冠词。 4.arousing改为arouse 考查并列成分。本句中动词understand和arouse属于并列结构,都充当us的补足语,所以都使用动词原形。句意:他们帮助我们更好理解科学并激发我们对科学发现的好奇心。 5.how改为why 考查表语从句连词。根据前一句we read for fun and inspiration,是在解释我推荐文学类书籍的原因。所以使用why引导表语从句,why表示原因,how表示方式,与上下文串联不一致。 6.writing改为written 考查分词用法。动词write与名词these classic works构成被动关系,所以使用过去分词短语在句中充当后置定语。 7.beautifully改为beautiful 考查形容词。在英语中通常使用形容词做定语修饰名词;而副词通常做状语,不能修饰名词。所以本句中使用形容词beautiful修饰名词language。 8.It改为They 考查代词。本句中代词they指代前一句中的these classic works,在句中作主语,因为该词是复数形式,所以用代词they。 9.us后面加with 考查固定搭配。动词短语provide sb with sth提供某人某物,其中的介词with是不能省略的。句意:他们不仅给我们快乐,还鼓励我们批判性地思考。 10.this改为it 考查固定句式。句式:I would appreciate this if......要是...我会感激不尽...。其中的it是不能省略的。 考点:考查短文改错
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