Question

短文改错

Usually most divers don’t go very deep．Mainly they dive to a deep of about 20 meters．Then they swam around as they slowly return to the surface．Everyone wants to dive must first have diving lessons．There are the number of dangers that you have to learn about．For one thing，you might have problems with its air bottle．A diver must know however the equipment works and be able to recognize possible problem．There are also dangerous types of fish that you must look out for．You must be familiar to the environment you’ll be diving in．Before you go on a dive，make sure you know that what you are getting into．Diving may look easily，but if you don’t have the necessary training，it can be both difficult and dangerous．

Answer

1.deep 改为depth

2.swam 改为swim

3.Everyone后面加 who/that（或者Everyone改为Whoever）

4.the改为a

5.its 改为your

6.however 改为how

7.problem改为problems

8.to改为with

9.去掉that

10.easily改为easy

【解析】

1.deep 改为depth “深度达”是短语a depth of ，冠词后用名词形式，因此deep 改为depth。

2.swam 改为swim通篇是一般现在时，因此过去时swam改为swim。

3.Everyone后面加 who/that（或者Everyone改为Whoever） Everyone是先行词，在定语从句中做主语，指人用关系代词who/that，也可以Everyone改为Whoever，变成主语从句，因此Everyone后面加 who/that（或者Everyone改为Whoever）。

4.the改为a“许多的”a number of ；“．．．．．数量” the number of，根据句意这里有很多危险，因此 the改为a。

5.its 改为your你的氧气瓶可能出现故障，代词错误its 改为your．

6.however 改为how一名潜水员必须知道所携带的仪器如何工作，根据句意用“如何”how，而不是无论如何，因此however改为how。

7.problem改为problems并能够识别出可能出现的一些问题，“问题”用名词复数形式。problem改为 problems。

8.to改为with对．．．．熟悉be familiar with something，某事对于某人来说很熟悉be familiar to somebody，to改为with。

9.去掉that宾语从句中用what作宾语，that是多余的，去掉that。

10.easily改为easy系动词“看起来”look后面加形容词，easily改为easy。