Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下面写出改加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在改词下面写出修改后的词。注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Recently there had been many reports about teenagers’ safety, in which some of them got hurt and even lost their lives. Besides, it’s necessary for our teenagers to develop self-protection awareness and learn to protect ourselves. But how can we protect ourselves? First of all, we should make a rule to eat healthy food, in case unhealthy food does harm for our health. Second, we should be careful when made friends, especially online. Third, for the sake of our safety and the others’ safety, we should obey the traffic rules. Last but not least, if we are in dangers, we should call the police immediate. All in all, we must keep safety in mind, no matter when and where we are.

Answer

1.had 改为have

2.and 改为or

3.Besides改为Thus /Therefore

4.our改为us

5.make 与a 中间加it

6.for 改为to

7.made改为making;

8.去掉the others’的the

9.dangers改为danger

10.immediate 改为 immediately

【解析】

1.had 改为have考查时态。根据全文分析可知，本文为一般现在时，故改为have。

2.and 改为or考查or的用法。在否定句和疑问句中，“和”用or来表示，故改为or。

3.Besides改为Thus /Therefore考查介词。根据上下文内容分析可知，前后构成了因果关系，Thus /Therefore意为“因此”，符合语境，故改为Thus /Therefore。

4.our改为us考查宾语。介词后面接宾语，“我们”的宾语形式是us，故改为us。

5.make 与a 中间加it考查固定用法。使得它变成规律，一般用“make it a rule”来表示，故添加it。

6.for 改为to考查固定结构。Do harm to sth.意为“对……有伤害”，是固定结构，故改为to

7.made改为making考查这里是省略句，省略了we are，be动词后面动词用-ing的形式，故改为making。

8.去掉the others’的the考查固定结构。别人的，一般前面不用接the，故去掉the。

9.dangers改为danger考查短语。In danger意为“处于危险中”，是固定结构，故改为danger。

10.考查副词。Immediately用来修饰call，故改为immediately。