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Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately

 

1.with改为about 2.go改为goes 3.wait后加for 4.classmate改为classmates 5.trying改为try 6.calmly改为calm 7.a改为the 8.us改为you 9.去掉when 10.and改为or 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于说明文,说明当火灾铃声响起的时候,我们应该如何去做保护自己。 1.with改为about 考查固定搭配talk about something谈论关于某事。 2.2】 go改为goes 考查时态.本句的主语a fire alarm为单数,谓语动词使用第三人称单数形式goes。 3.3】wait后加for 考查动词固定搭配。此处wait为不及物动词,后接宾语时需加上介词for,构成wait for…等待…。 4.4】classmate改为classmates 考查名词单复数。此处表达同班同学应为复数形式,因为同伴同学应该有多人,而不会只是一个。 5.5】trying改为try 考查句式。此处为祈使句,因为连词and连接的是两个同样性质的内容,前面是一个祈使句Don't panic or get out of line,后面也应该是一个祈使句。故使用try,而不是trying。 6.6】calmly改为calm 此句remain为系动词,后接形容词作表语构成系表结构。 7.7】a改为the 考查冠词。当文章中第二次提到前面的某一名词时,需使用the表示特指。 8.8】 us改为you 考查代词。根据句子的主语your teacher可知你的老师会带你们回教室。 9.9】 去掉when 考查宾语从句连词。根据句意,如果你注意到有人失踪或受伤……,可知此处是that引导的宾语从句表陈述,故when多余。 10.0】and改为or 考查连词。根据句意“有人不见或者受伤”可知Or表示的是选择的关系。 【名师点睛】 综观近十年的高考短文改错题,不难看出常见的改错六大思路是:一致关系、连接手段、平行结构、非谓语动词形式、删除冗言、冠词使用等。现结合近几年的高考试题对这六大思路分析如下: 一、一致关系 短文改错中所涉及到的一致关系包括主谓一致、时态一致和代词指代一致。谓语动词的单、复数形式要与句子的主语在人称和数上保持一致,动词的时态要与时间状语或上下文的时态保持一致,代词所指的内容与其先行词在词性和数方面以及与其自身的指代,要在意义上保持一致。 11. 考查时态.一致 12. 考查名词单复数 二、连接手段 连接不当会造成上下文不衔接。英语中句与句连接一般使用并列连词或从属连词。或若并列句,要判断句与句之间是并列、转折、选择、递进关系,还是让步关系。从而选择恰当的连词,若为复合句,首先应判断内含何种从句,然后根据主、从句之间的关系判断连接词的使用是否正确,是否有遗漏或多余现象,要注意句子结构的完整性。 13. 考查连词 三、平行结构 平行结构是指两个或更多的具有相似或相同的句法功能的词、词组或从句并列在一起的结构,在表达相互平行的概念时,要使用相同的语法结构,即动词与动词并列,形容词与形容词并列,不定式与不定式并列,短语与短语并列。平行结构常使用等立连词and,but, or或连词词组not only„but also„,not.. but, either„or„,neither„nor„,as well as等。 四、非谓语动词形式 主要考查不定式符号to的多余或遗漏,to是介词还是不定式符号,现在分词与过去分词、动名词等。 五、删除冗言 造成冗言错误的原因主要由于汉英表达上的差异。对英语惯用语在使用上的细微差异,主要考程度副词和频度副词。如:much more, often等的多余,介词的多余,语义的重复,固定搭配中多余的词以及由于受汉语的影响而多用了某些词语等。 14. 考查宾语从句连词 六、冠词的使用 冠词是英语中特有的词,由于汉语中没有与之相对应的词,大家对它的用法感到难以掌握,高考英语短文改错题对冠词的考查几乎每年都有,但多数是考查其基本用法,如不可数名词泛指时前面多冠词;单数可数名词前少冠词不定冠词a,an与定冠词the的错误使用;固定搭配中冠词的误用等等。 15. 考查冠词 考点:考查短文改错
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【1】A safari park is a park in which wild animals are kept. They are mainly located in east or central Africa. They often occupy a very wild area, with mountains and rivers. To visit the park and look at the animals, people have to drive around in a car for a few of hours because the park is huge.

【2】In south Africa there is a safari park, which contains all sorts of wild animals like lions, elephants, rhinoceroses(犀牛), zebras, wild pigs, deer and giraffes.

【3】There is a wild road leading through the park, but nobody is permitted to walk on the road. Anyone traveling in the park has to go in a car because wild animals may fiercely attack people. From the car he may see almost every types of African wildlife. Some of these are getting scarce (稀有的) because people kill them for various reasons. For example, rhinoceroses are killed for their horns (角), which are used in traditional Chinese medicines for colds and headaches. Perhaps they will be seen only in museums and books one day.

【4】Travels may buy food for the animals. They can feed them when they tour the park. Of course, they should not feed them in a close distance because the wild animals may attack people. In addition, they should only give proper food to the animals.

【5】A traveler may carry a gun with him in his journey. The gun is given to him by the government. However, it is not used for hunting. In fact, a seal(封条) is fixed to it. The traveler may fire at a wild beast to defend himself in case he is attacked. However, he has to prove to the government that he has been attacked and that he has not fired at a harmless animal.

1.List one of the reasons why travelers have to stay in a car during their visit.(no more than 6 words)

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2.Why are rhinoceroses getting scarce?(no more than 7words)

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3.What warning are given to travelers when they feed the animals?(no more than   15 words)

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4.How does the government know the gun is fired?(no more than 10 words)

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5.What is the passage mainly about?(no more than 6 words)_____________________________________________________________________

 

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I look in the mirror, and I'm not happy with what I see. I don't have a "perfect" face. I look in the magazines and all I see are girls with fair hair, blue eyes, and, of course, a pretty little nose. They're on the outside of the buses that I take home, the television programs I watch, and the billboards(广告牌) I walk under. Almost every advertisement I see shows this human physical "perfection". These billboards not only tell me what to drink, but also how to look.

Our society place more importance on a person's physical beauty, rather than their ability, honesty and character. We have influenced women to go through painful surgeries(手术)and starve themselves to become this society built physical model. To be a beautiful woman in the 21st century doesn't mean that you are a brilliant doctor or caring mother. It means you have the perfect jaw, eyes and lips. It means that you can be six feet tall and weigh one hundred and ten pounds.

But what about the women who are starting to leave their youth? Instead of looking at aging as a sign of wisdom, we try to prevent the aging process(过程). It's a kind of funny thing to want to look eighteen when fifty. Fifty is a relaxed age, when you can step back and look at all you've achieved(successfully complete something). It is when your hard work pays off. Unfortunately, our society just sees you as “old”. To stop the aging process, women buy wrinkle(皱纹) creams, do eye lifts and face lifts. They spend thousands of dollars to win the hopeless battle against age.

I remember when I was about thirteen years old and going through teens, I had oily hair, and a half developed body. I hated the way I looked. I used to cry to my mother all the time, but she would just laugh and tell me that "you don't want anyone to like your appearance. It's your heart that is important, because beauty fades.(消逝)" I knew that she was right. If you work on your heart enough, people will start to see the beauty in you, which lasts and remains on even after you die.

1.The main idea of the first paragraph is that    .

A. the author doesn't have a perfect face

B. women have to look beautiful

C. photos of beautiful girls can be seen everywhere

D. there are too many beauties in daily life

2.What's the author's attitude towards being "old"?

A. It's a pity that people have to get old.

B. It's a fruitful and wise time.

C. It's stupid to try to stay young.

D. It's a pity that society looks down upon the old.

3. It is         that regard(s) the physical beauty as more important.

A. women themselves              B. the author's parents

C. newspapers and magazines      D. society

4.What's the author's opinion about beauty?

A. The author doesn't like the beauties our society values.

B. It is not important whether a person looks beautiful or not.

C. It is a person's heart and inner qualities that are important rather than the physical beauty.

D. The author feels appearance is important to a person.

 

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When did you last see a polar bear(北极熊)?On a trip to a zoo, perhaps? If you had attended a winter activity in New York a few years ago, you would have seen a whole polar bear club. These "Polar Bears" are people who meet frequently in the winter to swim in freezing cold water. That day, the air temperature was 3℃,and the water temperature was a little higher. The members of the Polar Bear Club at Coney Island, New York are usually about the age of 60.Members must satisfy two requirements. First, they must get along well with everyone else in the group; this is very important because there are so many different kinds of people in the club. Polar Bears must also agree to swim outdoors at least twice a month from November through February.

Doctors don't agree about the medical effects of cold-winter swimming. Some are worried about the dangers of a condition in which the body's temperature drops so low that finally the heart stops. Other doctors, however, point out that there is more danger of a heart attack during summer swimming because the difference between the air temperature and water temperature is much greater in summer than in winter.

The Polar Bears themselves are satisfied with the benefits of cold-water swimming. They say that their favorite form of exercise is very good for the circulatory system(循环系统)because it forces the blood to move fast to keep the body warm. Cold-water swimmers usually turn bright red after a few minutes in the water. A person who turns blue probably has a very poor circulatory system and should not try cold-water swimming.

The main benefits of cold-water swimming are probably mental. The Polar Bears love to swim all year round; they find it fun and relaxing. As one 70-year-old woman says," When I go into water, I pour my troubles into the ocean and let them float away."

1.The members of the Polar Bear Club must meet the following requirements except that_____.

A. they must swim outdoors at least 8 times in the four cold months

B. they must reach the age of 60

C. they should be easy to make friends with

D. they must agree to swim outdoors from November through February

2.According to the passage, some doctors believe it is true that_____.

A. Polar Bears are bears swimming in freezing water

B. cold-water swimming can make the body temperature dangerously high

C. you are healthy if cold-water swimming turns your skin color blue

D. cold-water swimming causes more heart attacks in summer than in winter

3.The Polar Bears like to swim all year round, for_____.

A. it is an easy way to keep the body warm in winter

B. they can remain young

C. they find it enjoyable and interesting

D. they might meet fewer troubles in life

4.The passage is mainly about_____.

A. the requirements of the Polar Bear Club

B. a group of cold-water-swimming lovers

C. the Polar Bears' life in New York

D. doctors' ideas about cold-water swimming

 

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Arriving in Sydney on his own from India, my husband, Rashid, stayed in a hotel for a short time while looking for a house for me and our children.

During the first week of his stay, he went out one day to do some shopping. He came back in the late afternoon to discover that his suitcase was gone. He was extremely worried as the suitcase had all his important papers, including his passport(护照).

He reported the case to the police and then sat there, lost and lonely in strange city, thinking of the terrible troubles of getting all the paperwork organized again from a distant country while trying to settle down in a new one.

Late in the evening, the phone rang. It was a stranger. He was trying to pronounce my husband’s name and was asking him a lot of questions. Then he said they had found a pile of papers in their trash can(垃圾桶)that had been left out on the footpath.

My husband rushed to their home to find a kind family holding all his papers and documents(文件). Their young daughter had gone to the trash can and found a pile of unfamiliar papers. Her parents had carefully sorted them out, although they had found mainly foreign addresses on most of the documents. At last they had seen a half-written letter in the pile in which my husband had given his new telephone number to a friend.

That family not only restored the important documents to us that day but also restored our faith and trust in people. We still remember their kindness and often send a warm wish their way.

1.What did Rashid plan to do after his arrival in Sydney?

A. Go shopping           B. Find a house

C. Join his family       D. Take a vacation

2.The girl’s parents got Rashid’s phone number from_______.

A. a friend of his family

B. a Sydney policeman

C. a letter in his papers

D. a stranger in Sydney

3. What does the underlined word “restored” in the last paragraph mean?

A. Showed                          B. Sent out

C. Delivered                       D. Gave back

4.Which of the following can be the best title for the text?

A. From India to Australia.

B. Living in a New Country.

C. Turning Trash to Treasure. (珍宝)

D. In Search of New Friends.

 

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Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium (水族馆)

The all-new Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium, situated in the heart of Melbourne’s CBD, is one of Victoria’s leading visitor attractions and an unforgettable outing for the whole family. Having 12 amazing zones of discovery, Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium is the very place that you cannot miss when you visit the city.

* Opening Times

Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium is open from 9:30 am until 6:00 pm every day of the year, including public holidays. Last admission is at 5:00 pm, one hour before closing.

* Location ( 位置)

Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium is located on the corner of Flinders Street and King Street, Melbourne. It is situated on the Yarra River, opposite Crown Entertainment Complex.

* Getting to Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium

Train

The Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium train stop is located on the free City Circle Tram route (公交线路) and also routes 70 and 75. City Circle trams run every 10 minutes in both directions.

Shuttle Bus

The Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium is a free bus service, stopping at key tourist attractions in and around the City. Running daily, every 15 minutes from 10:00 am to 4:00 pm.

Car Parking

While there is no public car parking at Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium, there are several public car parking lots available only a short walk away.

* Wheelchair Access

Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium provides people in wheelchairs with full access to all 12 zones. Each floor also has wheelchair accessible toilets.

* Terms

Tickets will be emailed to you immediately after purchase or you can download and print your ticket once payment has been accepted. Please print out all tickets purchased and present at the front entrance of Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium. No ticket, no entry!

1.Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium _________ .

A. is located at the center of the CBD in the city

B. has 12 most attractive places in Melbourne

C. admits visitors from 9:30 am until 6:00 pm

D. is beside Crown Entertainment Complex

2.Getting to Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium, visitors can take ________.

A. trains from Southern Cross train station

B. shuttle buses around the train station

C. boats across the Yarra River

D. either tram route 70 or 75

3.Sea Life Melbourne Aquarium offers visitors ________.

A. free car parking     B. wheelchair access

C. Internet connection D. transportation service

 

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