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短文改错

短文中共有l0处语言错误,每行中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出增加的词;

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;

修改:在错的词下划一横线:并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mike was one of my father’s younger brother. He has been died of cancer for two years. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.

 

Mike was one of my father's younger . He has been of cancer for two years. When I was a teenager, he taught how to hunt in the woods the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then on to one of his hunting destinations. Just dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, I learned to be brave and through the experience. 1.brother改成brothers 2.died改成dead 3.us改为me 4.used改成using 5.in后加a 6.travel改为travelled 7.after改为before 8.and改为or 9.去掉but 10.patiently改为patient 【解析】 试题分析:这篇文章主要描述了作者在小时候根据叔叔打猎,从而学会了勇敢和有耐心。 1.brother改成brothers 考查名词。根据前文的one of判断此处应用名词的复数形式,故brother改成brothers。 2.died改成dead 考查形容词。Die非延续性动词,不可以与for two years连用,be dead表示状态,可与成段的时间状语连用。故died改成dead 3.3】us改为me 考查代词。根据前文只提到作者自己,应是me。故us改为me。 4.4】used改成using 考查非谓语动词。句意:我是少年的时候,他教给我如何在森林里利用黄昏之前的几个小时打猎。此处是using作方式状语。故used改成using。 5.5】in后加a 考查冠词。此处的restaurant是第一次出现,并且此处表示“一家饭店”,故in后加a。 6.6】travel改为travelled 考查动词时态。根据前文的left,stayed判断,此处travelled应是与它们并列,并列的谓语动词应在时态上保持一致。故travel改为travelled。 7.7】after改为before 考查介词,根据上下文应该是在黄昏之前找到合适的地方,故after改为before。 8.and改为or 考查连词。根据and前后的选择关系判断,故and改为or。 9.去掉but 根据前文的though引导让步状语从句,主句和从句之间不可有连词连接,故去掉but。 10.patiently改为patient 考查形容词。根据前文的be brave判断此处应用形容词形式作表语,故 patiently改为patient。 【名师点睛】 关于改错题的建议 1.名词和限制词的搭配 主要涉及可数与不可数名词与冠词、指示代词、物主代词的错误搭配,以及名词的单复数的误用。如:11.brother改成brothers 考查名词。根据前文的one of判断此处应用名词的复数形式,故brother改成brothers。 2.动词的时态、语态以及非谓语动词 常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时中间杂有另一时态的现象,以及动词的谓语与非谓语形式、非谓语动词之间的误用。如. 12.6】travel改为travelled 考查动词时态。根据前文的left,stayed判断,此处travelled应是与它们并列,并列的谓语动词应在时态上保持一致。故travel改为travelled。 3.代词的误用 主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了名词性等。 4.数词的误用 主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用,以及hundred, thousand, dozen, score等词和具体数量词连用时的用法以及表示约数的用法。 5.形容词与副词 主要涉及到形容词和副词的原级、比较级与最高级的误用,以及形容词和副词的误用以及名词和形容词的混用等。如13.patiently改为patient 考查形容词。根据前文的be brave判断此处应用形容词形式作表语,故 patiently改为patient。 6.考查英语中的并列现象 在一些英语中的并列结构中没有用并列的语法结构,如并列连词连接的两个部分等。 7.考查上下文的逻辑关系 but, and, so,however, otherwise等一些并列连词和连接副词的误用。before, after, when, until, since等状语从句引导词的误用等。还有肯定和否定的误用等。 8.一些相似结构的误用 如used to do, be used to do, be used to doing等结构的误用。 9.惯用法的搭配 改错步骤 上述9个方面,同学们在做题时只要稍加留意,找出错误的比率就会增大很多。做短文改错题时一般遵循以下几个步骤: 1.先通读全文。认真阅读短文,在做题之前确保已经弄清原文大意。注意文章中上下文的逻辑关系是否正确,时态、人称、主谓、指代等是否一致。 2.聚焦出题热点、综合运用所学语言知识,分句(注意以句子为单位而不是以行为单位)对不同的错误情况进行分析和回答(即改词、加词或减词)。 3.再次通读全文,校对自己的改正是否正确。一般各种改错的方式都应该用到,如果出现了某一种改法(如加词、减词等)没有用到,要考虑自己的改错应该有问题,要对刚才不是很有把握的行进行推敲。在自己认为正确的行后划勾,并且校对其他行改正的符号是否准确,大小写是否拼写正确(这点同学们很容易忽视)。如果某一行有两种改错方式要推敲哪一种是最佳改法。 考点:考查固定搭配以及语法
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阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,然后从各题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中,选出最佳选项。

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2.A. cry           B. sleep         C. hear          D. read

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4.A. explain        B. become        C. manage       D. choose

5.A. down           B. off           C. in          D. up

6.A. even if        B. not only     C. so that       D. as if

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10.A. falling     B. hanging       C. stepping     D. rushing

11.A. copied        B. stole         C. expressed     D. figured

12.A. chickens    B. children     C. cows          D. birds

13.A. ask          B. find          C. lead          D. recognize

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15.A. feel        B. knowledge      C. opinion      D. sight

16.A. directions  B. signs          C. notes       D. topics

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4. Ask friends,family or colleagues for assistance and tell them exactly how they can help. If your credit card bills have risen,for instance,let friends now that you are cutting back on expenses. Suggest having a common dinner instead of meeting at an expensive restaurant. Find support group or organization related to your goal and attend their meeting. You can get valuable advice, understanding and information.

If possible,change your environment to encourage positive behavior. Want to get in shape? Keep a set of workout clothes in your office as a reminder to stop by the gym on the way home. Quitting smoking? 5. 

A. Real success takes time.

B. Focus on one goal at a time.

C. Change your environment to change your life.

D. Improve your willpower by a support network.

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F. Avoid bars or restaurants where you might be attracted to light up.

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Today’s scientists write articles for scientific journals. Unlike the early explorers’ journals, scientific papers can now be very difficult for non-scientists to understand. Writers in Antarctica work to explain the research to the public. Peter Rejcek is editor, writer, and photographer for the Antarctic Sun, an online magazine devoted to news about the U.S. Antarctic Program. Rejeck began his career in the Antarctic in 2003 by spending a year at the South Pole. He has returned every year since,interviewing, scientists about research at Palmer,McMurdo,and South Pole stations.

There are also scientists in Antarctica who work hard to explain their research to the public. Scientist Diane McKnight wrote The Lost Seal,a children’s book that explains the research she and others are doing in an unusual ice-free area in Antarctica called the Dry Valleys.

Antarctica is full of stories and wonders that are scientific, historic and personal. People such as Martin, Surgent, Rejcek, and Diane McKnight are devoted to bringing those stories to as many people as they can. “Some people are going to be scientists,some people are going to be journalists,some people are going to be artists,but we can all work together. says Surgent, “to celebrate,this extraordinary place.”

1.What do we know about the NSF?

A. It is a government agency.

B. It only funds scientists in Antarctica.

C. It encourages the understanding of human nature.

D. It enables the mixing of science and art for the first time.

2.Why didn’t some earliest explorers bring writers along?

A. Writers were not funded at that time.

B. Writing can’t capture the beauty of the continent.

C. Writers were not interested in popularizing science.

D. Early explorers ’journals can be easily understood by the public.

3.By mentioning Diane McKnight, the author may try to suggest that_____.

A. scientists should explain their research to children

B. writers are not necessary since scientists can tell stories as well

C. telling stories to children is more important than knowing the truth

D. no matter what role we play, we can work together to appreciate Antarctica

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B. The NSF: A Program for All

C. Antarctica: A Land of Beauty and Stories

D. The NSF: A Program for Artists and Scientists

 

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Over one million people worldwide die from these diseases each year. New research now shows how mosquitoes choose who to bite.

Mosquitoes need blood to survive. They are attracted to human skin and breath. They smell the carbon dioxide gas,which all mammals breathe out. This gas is the main way for mosquitoes to know that a warm-blooded creature is nearby.

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Michael Dickinson’s team used plumes—a material that rises into the air of carbon dioxide gas into a wind tunnel. They then used cameras to record the mosquitoes. The insects followed the plume.

Then,the scientists placed dark objects on the lighter colored floor and walls of the tunnel. Mr. Dickinson said,at first,the mosquitoes showed no interest in the objects at all. “What was quite striking and quite surprising is that the mosquitoes fly back and forth for hours. These are hungry females and they completely ignore the objects on the floor and wall of the tunnel. But the moment they get a hit of CO2. they change their behavior quite obviously and now would become attracted to these little visual blobs (斑点).”

This suggested to the researchers that a mosquito’s sense of smell is more important in the search for food. Once mosquitoes catch a smell of a human or animal, they also follow visual signals.

1.What do mosquitoes mainly use to find their targets?

A. Sense of smell. B. Sense of touch.

C. Sense of sight. D. Smart brains.

2.The first response of the mosquitoes to the objects in the experiment is      .

A. to fly to the dark ones

B. to catch and stick to them

C. to take no notice of them

D. to attach themselves to them

3.How can we avoid being attacked by mosquitoes according to the text?

A. Don’t let them see us.

B. Use dark objects to stop them.

C. Make them fly back and forth for hours.

D. Attract them to objects full of carbon dioxide gas.

4.What can be the best title for the text?

A. How Do Mosquitoes Survive?

B. Why Do Mosquitoes Need Blood?

C. How Do Mosquitoes Choose to Bite You?

D. Why Do Mosquitoes Attack the Human Being?

 

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