Question

书面表达

春节期间，很多同学收到了父母和亲戚给的压岁钱，近日，你在你班做了一个关于“中学生如何使用压岁钱(lucky money)”的调查,请根据以下内容和要求写一篇短文。

【写作内容】

1. 使用方式：

1)  一些同学存入银行，养成节约的习惯；

2)  一些同学购买书籍，获取更多的知识；

3)  其他方式(至少写两种方式)；

2. 请发表你对压岁钱使用的看法。

【写作要求】字数：100—120字; 文章第一句已经给出，不计入总数。

Recently, I have carried out a survey on how middle school students use our lucky money in my class.____________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer

Recently, I have carried out a survey on how middle school students use our lucky money in my class. The majority of my classmates would like to save it in the bank to cultivate a good habit of saving money, and we can take it out when we really need it. Some of us feel like buying some books on science or arts which bring us more knowledge，while some students intend to spend it on their hobbies. Some are so warm-hearted as to offer their lucky money to the children in the remote district to get education. Others prefer to spend money on stamp collecting, music, sports and so on.

Personally speaking, different persons may have different choices on how to spend his or her lucky money, but we should never waste it just eating junk food or playing electronic games.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语take out拿出来；feel like doing 喜欢做某事；spend sth on sth 在。。花费时间；Recently, I have carried out a survey on how middle school students use our lucky money in my class这个句子how引导on的宾语从句；Some of us feel like buying some books on science or arts which bring us more knowledge，while some students intend to spend it on their hobbies.这个句子which引导定语从句；

考点： 提纲类作文