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On a Friday night, a poor young artist was playing with his violin at a street corner with a large piece of paper on the ground. Before long, he was surrounding with people, who were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said, “Last night, a gentleman put an important thing into my hat with mistake. Please come to claim them soon.” Seeing this, people wondered why it could be. Some time later, a man came and take back his lottery which won a prize of $ 500,000. When asked why he didn’t keep it for himself, artist said, “While I don’t have much money, I live happy. However, if I lose honest, I won’t be happy forever.”

 

1.play with --- 去掉with 2.surrounding --- surrounded 3.word --- words 4.with (mistake) --- by 5.them --- it 6.why --- what 7.take --- took 8.artist --- 前加上 the 9.happy --- happily 10.honest --- honesty 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,介绍了一个品质高尚的流浪艺术家面对金钱的诱惑,保持真心的故事。 1.play with --- 去掉with 考查动词短语。短语play the violin弹奏小提琴,本句中的动词play表示“演奏”,是一个及无语动词,介词with是多余的。 2. surrounding --- surrounded 考查语态。主语he和动词surround构成被动关系,所以使用过去分词表示被动。句意:不久之后,他就被人们包围,人们被写在纸上的话所吸引。 3.word --- words 考查名词复数形式。名词word意为“说的话”的时候通常使用复数形式。句意:不久之后,他就被人们包围,人们被写在纸上的话所吸引。 4. with (mistake) --- by 考查介词固定搭配。句意:昨天晚上有一个绅士错误地在我的帽子里放了一个很重要的东西。介词短语by mistake错误地,这是一个固定搭配。 5.them --- it 考查代词。根据前句中an important thing可知这是单数名词,所以使用it指代单数名词,them指代复数名词。 6. why --- what 考查宾语从句连词。本题宾语从句中系动词be的后面缺少表扬,所以使用连接代词what引导这个宾语从句,并在句中作表语,why是连接副词,在句中只能做状语,不能做表语。 7.take --- took 考查时态。本文叙述的是过去发生的事情,所以使用一般过去时,而且本句中took和came是并列结构,都使用动词的过去式。 8. artist --- 前加上 the 考查定冠词。在英语中,通常使用定冠词the表示特指上文提到的同一事物,本句中the artist特指第一句中的a poor young artist。 9.happy --- happily 考查副词。在英语中通常使用副词做状语修饰形容词、副词或动词,所以本句中使用副词happily修饰动词live。 10.honest --- honesty 考查名词。动词lose是及物动词,后面要接名词做宾语,形容词honest的名词修饰是honesty。 【名师点睛】 短文改错常见错误类型有以下5种: 1. 谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点,常见动词错误类型有①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;②and前后动词时态不一致;③主谓不一致; ④缺少动词,特别是be动词; ⑤第三人称单数形式错用;⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。 They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies. (did改为do,错误类型属于①) As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. (visiting 改为visited, 错误类型属于②) There will an important game next month. (will后加be,错误类型属于④) One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. ( was 改为were,错误类型属于③) 本文【小题1、2、7】均属于动词的错误。 2. 名词的常见错误:单复数名词错用,可数名词与不可数名词错用。 I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(subject改为subjects) Their word were a great encouragement to me.(word改为words) Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.(knowledges改为knowledge) 本文【小题3、10】均属于名词的错误。 3. 连词错误 连词包括关系代词、副词,并列连词and/ or/but等。关于连词,一般考查从句关系who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。 I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. (错用了who的所有格形式,改为whose) I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.(此处应该是并列的关系而非转折,but改为and) Clever as she is, but she works very hard.(as意为“尽管”,不能再跟but连用,所以去掉but) 本文11. 4. 冠词错误:误用a和an(根据单词的第一个音素来判定);误用a/an和the(固定搭配,或泛指、特指;多冠词或少冠词) We maybe one family and live under a same roof. (a 改为the,the same 是固定搭配) As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of pants. (mountain是可数名词需用冠词,所以其前加a) I hope you have pleasant journey.(journey是可数名词,故have后加a) 本文12. 5. 形容词和副词错误:系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词smell/feel);词性的误用(形容词修饰名词;副词修饰动词、形容词)。 I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (time是名词所以要用形容词wonderful修饰) My pronunciation was terribly.(was后用形容词,terribly改为terrible.) 本文13. 考点:考查短文改错
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