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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week I paid a visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Smith. He and I are used to live next to each other. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for the main street. So they had to move apart. Mr. Smith now lived in the suburb near a beautiful park. His apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it takes quit a long time get to the downtown. Therefore, Mr. Smith doesn’t seem to worry about a long distance. A new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure that life will be better in the future.

 

1.删除are 2.which改为that 3.were改为was 4.they改为we 5.lived改为lives 6.big改为bigger 7.time后加to 8.Therefore改为However 9.a改为the 10.year改为years 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,介绍了我去看望以前的老邻居史密斯先生;并回忆了过去的住所以及现在对方的所住之地的信息。 1.删除are 考查固定搭配。短语used to do sth过去常常做某事;be used to do sth被用来做某事;他和我过去常常住在一起。 2.which改为that 考查同位语从句。本句中that引导同位语从句,that在句中不充当任何成分。which引导名词性从句时,要在句中作主语、宾语等成分。 3.were改为was 考查主谓一致。当句子主语为“A along with B”时,谓语动词和A保持一致。本句中主语是the old building,所以谓语动词使用单数was。 4.they改为we 考查代词。本句在we指代Mr. Smith和我两个人,所以使用we,而不是they。 5.lived改为lives 考查时态。本句的时间状语是now,所以使用一般现在时的时态,主语是单数名词Mr. smith,所以谓语动词使用lives。 6.big改为bigger 考查比较级。本句中介词than和比较级连用,句意:他现在的公寓要比以前的更大。 7.time后加to 考查固定句式。句式:It takes sb some time to do sth做某事花掉某人...时间。本句的it是形式主语,真正的主语是不定式短语。 8.Therefore改为However 考查上下文串联。句意:唯一的问题是到市中心要花很多时间,但是史密斯先生不担心距离太远。上下文之间为转折关系,所以使用副词however表示转折。 9.a改为the 考查冠词。本句中使用定冠词the表示特指,the long distance就是指前句中史密斯先生的公寓到市中心的距离。 10. 【名师点睛】 短文改错中词类错误可以从以下四个角度考虑: 5. 形容词、副词:形容词、副词的误用主要指在该用形容词的地方用了副词,该用副词的地方用了形容词。改错行中出现形容词或副词时就要仔细分析该形容词或副词修饰什么,形式是否正确,是原级、比较级还是最高级。形容词、副词误 用也是常考的改错项目之一。 1) I had not interest in English . interest是名词,应用形容词no来修饰,而not是副词,副词不能修饰名名词。 2) These are the happier girls I’ve ever seen.(NMET2007) 此处有I’ve ever seen限定,应用最高级,故happier应改为 happiest. 3) You can borrow a book very easy. easy 改为easily. 4) These books are very worth reading. 用well 修饰 6. 连词:短文改错中出现连词就要判断连词用的是否正确,是否 符合句子意思;连接的是词还是句子,是否符合逻辑关系。此 外如果是平行结构就要注意前后时态、语态、词性一致问题 平行结构常借助与并列连词and , or , but , not only…but also…, …not…but…, either…or…, neither …nor…, as well as等。 1) As it has been raining these days, so we have decided to put off our sports meeting. 由于前句有As引导原因状语从句,因此后句不能再用so,故应把so 去掉。 2) The population is growing, but the earth must support too many people. 根据上下文意思判断,前后两个并列分句不存在意义上的折,所以but应改为and或so.这是典型的并列连词误用。 7. 动词:动词错误在短文改错中所占比重最大,它所涉及的错误 包括动词的时态、语态错误;易混动词的用法错误; 动词的第三人称单数错误;动词的非谓语形式,以及动词的句型搭配错误等。在改错题中,动词方面的考查比例较大。 1) 动词的时态、语态错误 a. I will write again and send you the photos we take together. take photos 动作发生在过去,应用过去时. b. The book you borrowed from the library should returned in five days. 根据本句意义,should后应加上been,构成被动语态。 c. In school, I often playing football for my friends. playing改为 play; for 改为with 2) 易混动词使用错误 a. I persuaded him to stop smoking, but he didn’t listen. persuade 意为“说服”,强调成功的结果,而根据下句 he didn’t listen可知,劝说并没有成功,故应改persuaded为 advised. b. You please rise your hands. rise是不及物动词,而raise是及物动词,所以举手应用 raise your hands.这属于及物动词与不及物动词的误用。 3) 非谓语动词使用错误 a. We are looking forward to see you on the birthday party. look forward to 中的to是介词,应加动名词,将see改为seeing. b. I’m sorry I keep you wait for a long time .I got caught in the traffic. 在任何情况下keep均和doing连用,如keep doing sth.; keep sb. (sth).doing sth. keep …from doing… 等. c. I’d like to your pen friend, and get to know more about your country. to后加be。因其后是名词,而不是动词原形,不能直接用to. 8. 词语固定搭配: 主要考查介词与动词、名词、形容词的固定搭配;副词、动词的固定搭配;及物动词后多介词或副词以及不及物动词后少介词,英语中的一些固定句型与习惯搭配等。 1) My teacher advised me to keep my diary. keep a diary是固定搭配,意思是“写日记”. 2) In my surprise, he did very well in his previous job. To one’s surprise 是固定搭配 3) I thought that was dull to watch a game…(NMET2005) 此题考查it的功能,It + be + adj. + to do为固定结构。 4) …the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. 解析: not only… but also…为固定结构,故将and 改为but. 5) I have no difficulty learn maths. have difficulty (in) doing sth.为固定结构 6) He spends too much time play games. spend some time (in) doing sth.为固定结构 考点:考查短文改错
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阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式,并填在答题卡的相应位置。

I want to thank my son Jim for teaching me a valuable lesson in life by the great example he set. We 1.    (eat) at eh café when a person came in. he ordered his hamburger but didn’t have enough money to pay for it. 2.      any hesitation, Jim went over and put the extra $ 2 into his hand. When leaving, Jim also threw a five-cent coin onto the pavement and said something like, “Some kid will be cheerful3.       (discover) this.”

Last week, a young man at a petrol station didn’t have enough money to pay for his petrol. I asked the money collector, “How much short is he?” The collector told me he had meant4.      put $ 20 of petrol but he had been looking at the wrong gauge(计量表). Then it added up to 5.       (total) $ 26. Something made me think of 6.    Jim did that night in the café. I handed the man $ 6. He was so 7.      (astonish) and asked, “Why would you do this for me?” I just smiled.

It was my son who taught me that “It’s better to give   8.      to receive”. So when I happen to see a five-cent coin on the ground, 9.      is natural for me to leave it there in case some kid will get a kick out of 10.      (find) it.

 

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阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

John was 20 years old. He was a handsome and gifted ________  . But he stopped talking as much as he usually did after he graduated from high school. This year, his________  reduced to nothing. His parents knew he was   ________ , and continually told him that they loved him. Everyone was ________  about his well-being and wondered what they could say or do to help him, since saying “I love you” ________ wasn’t enough to improve his situation.

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5.A. directly       B. properly      C. obviously      D. specially

6.A. move         B. apology       C. difference      D. deal

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8.A. acquired       B. recovered      C. deepened        D. withdrew

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10.A. taken in      B. brought in     C. turned in      D. put in

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17.A. in person   B. with delight   C. by chance      D. on purpose

18.A. During      B. Before         C. By              D. After

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20.A. demanded      B. respected       C. protected       D. needed

 

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