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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Cathy,

I am writing to share my opinion on fashion with you, for I had just heard that you are disappointing because you can’t afford famous brands.

I shall say that it is naturally for people to care about his appearance. And it is true that fashionable thing like clothes and shoes will make one more eye-catching. Therefore, I think it is really a waste of money for you to buy famous brands. Besides, it will also add the burden of your parents.

What’s more, beauty is only skin-deep. There are many things in which can make you popular beside fashion. A great amount of knowledge and a warm heart will surely win others’ respect.

As the saying goes, never judge the person by his appearance. I do hope that you will remember the saying and be as happy as you used to be.

Yours,

Jane

 

1.had---have 2.disappointing--- disappointed 3.naturally--- natural 4.his --- their 5.thing ---things 6.Therefore ---However 7.在add和the之间加to 8.去掉in 9.beside ---besides 10.the---a 【解析】 1.had---have 句意:我刚刚听说你因为负担不起名牌而感到失望。可知用现在完成时态,故把had---have。 2.disappointing--- disappointed 句意:我刚刚听说你因为负担不起名牌而感到失望。故把disappointing--- disappointed。 3.naturally--- natural 形容词放在be动词后面做表语,故把naturally--- natural。 4.his --- their 句意:人们在意他们的外表是很自然的。故把his --- their。 5.thing ---things 句意:时尚的东西。thing是可数名词,故把thing ---things。 6.Therefore ---However 句意:然而,这真的是浪费钱。此处表示转折,故把Therefore ---However。 7.在add和the之间加to 句意:它也将增加你父母的负担。add to添加,增加。故在add和the之间加to. 8.去掉in 此处考查定语从句,many things是先行词,从句既缺主语,又缺引导词,可知引导词在这里做主语,故去掉in。 9.beside ---besides 句意:除了时尚外还使你受欢迎。故把beside ---besides。 10.句意:不要靠外表判断一个人。故把the---a。 【名师点睛】 1.beside(介词)在---旁边;besides(副词)另外,此外;besides(介词)除---之外还有---。 2.nature大自然(前面不用冠词);natural自然的;naturally自然地。 3. 表示情感的现在分词和过去分词 surprising令人惊讶的,surprised感到惊讶;frightening令人害怕的, frightened感到害怕; moving令人感动的, moved 感动;exciting 令人兴奋的,excited 感到兴奋;boring令人厌烦的, bored感到厌烦;disappointing令人失望的,disappointed感到失望的。现在分词的主语通常指事物;过去分词的主语通常指人。比如第2小题,disappointing--- disappointed 句意:我刚刚听说你因为负担不起名牌而感到失望。故把disappointing--- disappointed。 考点:考查短文改错
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