Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Yesterday I was gone home by the bus and my father was going to pick me up at the station. On the bus, I see a young woman with several bags of heavier books get on. I wanted to offer her my seat, and I didn’t. In my surprise, she and I got off at the same stations later. After a short conversation, I learned she had to walk a long way home. So I offered give her a ride and she accepted. When thinking of this experience, I was sad that she didn’t do the right thing the first time on the bus. But I was very happy to have a second chance to doing it.

Answer

1.gone → going

2.去掉the

3.see → saw

4.heavier → heavy

5.and → but

6.In → To

7.stations → station

8.offered后加to

9.she → I

10.doing → do

【解析】

1.gone → going 根据句意可知：昨天我将要回家。此处用过去进行时态表示将来，故把gone → going。

2.去掉the 固定搭配by bus，故去掉中间的the。

3.see → saw 这是昨天的事，所以用一般过去时态，故see → saw。

4.heavier → heavy 此处表示“几袋重的书”用形容词的原级，故heavier → heavy。

5.and → but 句意：我想把我的座位让给她，但是我没有。此处表示转折，故and → but。

6.In → To 固定词组：to one’s surprise使某人惊讶的是------，故In → To。

7.stations → station 句意：后来我在同样的站下车。故把stations → station。

8.offered后加to 固定搭配：offer to do sth.提供做某事，故在offered后加to。

9.she → I 句意：我伤心在公共汽车上没做真确的事情。故把she → I。

10.

【知识归纳】

1.to one’s surprise/joy/excitement/satisfaction/disappoinment/regret使某人惊讶（高兴、兴奋、满意、失望、遗憾）的是----。如果表示“非常---的”，则在to前面加much或在名词surprise/joy/excitement/satisfaction/disappoinment/regret前加great.例如：much to one’s surprise/to one’s great surprise使某人非常惊讶的是---。

2.常用动词不定式做宾语的动词

agree/offer/intend/plan/demand/ask/promise/help/want/hope/expect/decide/choose/wish +to do sth.

3.动词不定式做定语

the chance to do sth.做---的机会；the way to do sth.做---的方法；the first/last +to do sth.第一个或最后一个做---的。

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