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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Peter,

In your last email, you said you like collecting stamps. That sounds greatly. I like it, too and had already collected lots of them. So I’d be glad to offer you some Chinese stamp.

Besides collecting stamps, I enjoy listen to different kinds of music in my spare time, like pop music, jazz, classical music and so on. For a result, I have made many good friends but learnt much about the world. So I have benefited a lot my hobbies.

As a Senior 1 student, I am now working very hard to prepare for the coming exam. In the class, I listen to the teachers attentively and take notes careful. After class, I take an active part on various sports to keep healthy.

Best wishes.

 

1.like改为liked 2.greatly 改为 great 3.had 改为 have 4.stamp改为stamps 5.listen 改为listening 6.For改为As 7.but改为and 8.lot与my之间插入from 9.careful改为carefully 10.on改为in 【解析】 试题分析: 1.like改为liked考查动词。上封邮件你说你喜欢收集邮票,是过去的事,用过去式。故like改为liked 2.greatly 改为 great考查形容词。修饰动词用形容词,这听起来很好。故greatly 改为 great 3.had 改为 have考查动词,本文是一般现在时,故动词用一般现在式。故had 改为 have 4.stamp改为stamps考查名词。邮票是可数名词,这里说的是一些邮票,故是复数。故stamp改为stamps 5.listen 改为listening考查动词, enjoy后接动词ing形式,表示享受于做某事。故listen 改为listening 6.For改为As 考查固定短语,As a result结果。故For改为As 7.but改为and考查连词。这里表并列关系而不是转折关系,我交到很多朋友和学到很多关于这个世界的东西。故but改为and 8.lot与my之间插入from考查固定搭配,benefit from通过…获益;我通过我的爱好获益很多。故lot与my之间插入from 9.careful改为carefully考查副词。修饰动词take用副词,认真做笔记。故careful改为carefully 10.on改为in考查介词。固定搭配take part in参加。故on改为in 考点:考查短文改错 【学法指导】 在短文改错中常出现的错误主要有以下几类: 1. 名词单复数用错,可数与不可数名词的混用。比如第3句So I’d be glad to offer you some Chinese stamp. 邮票是可数名词,这里说的是一些邮票,故是复数。故stamp改为stamps 2. 动词:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语;需要接ing形式的接了to,或相反等。比如第二句I like it, too and had already collected lots of them. 本文是一般现在时,故动词用一般现在式。故had 改为 have 3. 形容词副词:常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反;关系副词where, when, why等的缺失或错用。比如倒数第三句I listen to the teachers attentively and take notes careful. 考查副词。修饰动词take用副词,认真做笔记。故careful改为carefully 4. 介词:主要是介词的多余或缺失,错用。比如倒数第二句After class, I take an active part on various sports to keep healthy. 考查介词。固定搭配take part in参加。故on改为in 5. 主谓一致性:第三人称单数漏掉s,或主语为复数,谓语动词用了单数;再就是就近原则对主语的影响。 6. 冠词:定冠词the的多余或缺失,如季节,月份,星期,球类及三餐活动,称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the。 7. 数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用。 8. 连词:不合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词(如but)的时候用了承接连词(so),或相反等等。比如第5句I have made many good friends but learnt much about the world. 考查连词。这里表并列关系而不是转折关系,我交到很多朋友和学到很多关于这个世界的东西。故but改为and 9. 代词:主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格,主格或相反,关系代词的错用或缺失。 10. 常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错。比如第5句For a result, I have made many good friends but learnt much about the world. 考查固定短语,As a result结果。故For改为As
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