Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was often laughed at my classmates before I turned 14 because I was always very nervous when talking to someone. Helpful and sad, I felt that I could hardly do nothing. You cannot imagine what great difficulty I have in my life. And later, something happened, what changed my life completely. It was an English speech contest and my mother encouraged me to take part in it. I tried my best to remember the whole speech “Believe in yourself” and practised them over 100 times. Believe it or not, I finally won the first prize. Heard the cheers from the teachers and students, I stood there, with my eyes full with excited tear.

Answer

1.laughed at—laughed at by

2.Helpful—Helpless

3.去掉hardly或nothing—anything

4.have—had

5.And—But

6.what—which

7.them—it

8.Heard—Hearing

9.with—of或者full—filled

10.tear—tears

【解析】

1.laughed at—laughed at by考查介词。Laugh at sb嘲笑某人，be laughed at by被……嘲笑。

2.Helpful—Helpless考查形容词。Helpful有帮助的，helpless无助的；被别人嘲笑，又无能为力，所以感到无助，用helpless..

3.去掉hardly或nothing—anything考查固定短语。Could do nothing无能为力，与could hardly do anything意思相同。

4.have—had考查时态。你难以想象我那时的困难，have应该使用一般过去时。所以，用had。

5.And—But 考查连词。那时困难重重，但是后来情况发生了变化。表示转折，用but。

6.what—which考查定语从句。which引导的定语从句指代前面句子的内容。句意：后来发生了一些事情，这完全改变了我的生活。所以用which。

7.them—it 考查代词。这个演讲我练习了100多遍，用it指代上文提到的the whole speech “Believe in yourself”。

8.Heard—Hearing考查非谓语动词。主句主语I 与Hear是主谓关系，用现在分词做状语。故用Hearing。

9.with—of或者full—filled考查固定短语。Be full of/be filled with 充满。

10. 考查名词用法。tear眼泪，可数名词，full of 后应该用tears

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