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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其正下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词正下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词，请严格按照要求格式修改。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The person who has taught me most about the life is my grandmother. She was more than just a grandmother to me. When she died a few years before, I felt I lost a really good friend. She always looked very nice on her age. She did everything she could make me feel at home. She was imaginative and would spend hours telling me stories she has made up. I am sure it was because of her which I became a story writer. Apart from kept a young boy entertained, she taught me a large number of important thing on how to behave. I was rather impatient when I was a child and she taught me that good things happened if I could wait for it. She was a positive person but she also taught me how to look for the good in everything.

Answer

1.去掉most

2.before— ago

3.on —for/at

4.could后加to

5.去掉has或has —had

6.which— that

7. kept —keeping

8.thing —things

9.it —them

10.but—and

【解析】

试题分析：本文叙述了关于我的祖母不仅仅教会了我生活,还教我如何寻找生活中一切都好的东西，考查学生对固定搭配，动词时态和语态，名词，代词，连词，以及定语从句，强调句等的运用。

1.考查句式teach sb about sth 教会某人有关某事。句意：教会了我有关生活的人是我的祖母。由句意可知去掉most。

2.考查固定用法some time ago 一段时间前。句意：几年前当她去世时，我觉得我失去了一个很好的朋友。所以before— ago。

3.考查短语for/at one’s age 以......的年龄/在......的年纪时。句意：在她那个的岁数上，她总是看上去精神很不错。所以on —for/at 。

4.考查动词不定式。句意：她做了她能做的所有事，使我感到舒适，无拘束。由句意可知用动词不定式表目的，所以could后加to。

5.考查动词时态。句意：她富有想象力，会花很多时间给我讲她编的故事。过去的动作用过去时，此处可用一般过去时或过去完成时。所以去掉has或has —had。

6.考查强调句。句意：我肯定正是因为她，我成为了小说作家。强调句式：It is/was+强调部分+tha+其它，所以which— that。

7.考查非谓语动词。Apart from+doing，所以kept —keeping。

8.考查名词复数。a large number of+复数名词，所以thing —things。

9.考查代词。由上下文可知等待的事情是复数，所以it —them。

10.考查连词。句意：她是一个积极的人，而且她还教我如何寻找一切美好的东西。由句意可知此处是递进关系，所以but—and。

考点：短文改错。