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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It’s no surprise that we may have different opinions in organizing activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect an opinion of the majority.

The main reason for my choice is that I am great influenced by a special culture when grow up. In this culture which collectivism is emphasized, I tent to sacrifice my own interest to the group benefit. Once we are left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park and to go to a museum. I preferred to go to a museum when most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitations, I decided to follow him and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.

 

1.an改为 the; 2.great 改为 greatly; 3.grow改为 growing 4.which改为where 5.interest to 中to 改为 for; 6.are 改为 were ; 7.and改为 or 8.when改为while; 9.Hesitations 改为hesitation; 10.him改为them 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,介绍了在集体活动中,当我们个人的观点和大部分人的观点不一致的时候,我们要服从大部分人的观点。作者还举例进行了说明。 1.an改为 the; 考查定冠词语法。本句中名词opinion的后面有介词短语of the majority修饰,说明该词表示特指,所以使用定冠词the修饰该词,特指大部分人的观点。 2.great 改为 greatly; 考查副词。英语中通常使用副词做状语修饰形容词、副词或动词。而形容词通常在句中做定语或者表语。本句中副词greatly修饰谓语动词am greatly influences。 3.grow改为 growing 考查分词做状语。本句中动词短语grow up与句子主语I构成主动关系,所以使用现在分词短语growing up在句中做时间状语。 4.which改为where 考查定语从句。本题定语从句的先行词是culture,后面的定语从句结构很完整,所以使用关系副词where引导这个定语从句,并在句中做状语。 5.interest to 中to 改为 for; 考查介词。本句中介词for表示目的。句意:我愿意为团队的利益牺牲我个人的理由。 6.are 改为 were ; 考查时态。本句中once意为“曾经”,表示过去发生的事情,所以本句使用一般过去时的时态。 7.and改为 or 考查固定搭配。搭配whether...or....是...还是...;曾经我们要决定是要公园野餐还是参观博物馆。 8.when改为while; 考查连词。本句中连词while表示轻微地转折,意为“然而,可是”。句意:我更想去博物馆,然而大部分同学想去野餐。 9.Hesitations 改为hesitation; 考查动名词。介词without后面通常要接名词或动名词做宾语,所以使用名词hesitation在句中作为介词without的宾语。另外名词hesitation是不可数名词,没有复数形式。 10.him改为them 考查代词。本句中使用动词them指代上文提到的most of my classmates。毫不犹豫,我决定和他们一起去野餐,那一天我们的确玩得很愉快。 【名师点睛】 在完成短文改错时,我们要遵循“四原则”: 1. 改动处以最少为原则。“短文改错”题要求每行只能改动一处,改动的方法可以是增词、删词或换词,但无论作何种改动,只能是增加一词、减少一词或把一个词改成另一个词。当然,没有错误的行无需改动。也就是说,每行改动之处不能超过一个。 2. 实词以改变词形为原则。在“短文改错”题中,一般只是改变实词的形式,而不能改变实词的词义,也不能将其改换成另一个实词,更不能随便增删。例如: ① The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon ... (把keeps改为keeping) ② Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from ... (把clearly改为clear) 3. 虚词以添加或删除为原则。历年的“短文改错”题中需要添加或删除的地方差不多有3至4处。这些需要添、删的词一般都是虚词(如冠词、介词等),不是实词(如动词、名词等),否则会改变句子的原意。例如: ① They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early ... (删去that) ② He was looking for a glass the cupboard. (the前面加in) 4. 以保持句子原意不变为原则。做“短文改错”题时,一般不应改变句子原意。改错时,应该针对短文中的用词错误、语法错误、逻辑错误加以改正,不应更改作者的原意。做到换词不改意,加词不增意,去词不减意。如有多种改法,应以保持原意为条件,择其佳者而从之。例如: But I have spent most my money, so I cannot… 改正:在my前加of。也有同学去掉most,这种改法虽改正了语法错误,但改变了原意。作者想说的是“花掉了大部分的钱,而不是全部”。 考点:考查短文改错
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