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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street, he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come towards them. It was too late for Allee to escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible.

 

1.surprising 改成surprised 2.has 改成had 3.such改成so 4.to turn green的to去掉 5.while改成when 6.them改成him 7.or改成and 8.had和operation中间加an 9.dangers改成danger 10.sincere改成sincerely 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,叙述了我的朋友Allee被汽车撞倒的详细情况。 1. 改成surprised 考查形容词。形容词surprising令人惊讶的,通常修饰事物;surprised感到惊讶的,通常修饰人或与人有关的事物。本句主语是I,所以使用形容词surprised。 2. 改成had 考查时态。本句的主语是was,可知Allen被撞是在我听说之前就已经发生的事情,所以使用过去完成时had been hit。 3. 考查固定句式。so的后面通常要接形容词或副词,构成“so+形容词/副词+that....”。而such的后面通常要接名词或名词短语,构成“such+名词/名词短语+that....”。所以本句中形容词careful的前面要加so。 4. turn green的to去掉 考查固定结构。固定结构see sb/sth do sth看见sb/sth做了某事,do前面省略了不定式符号to;本句中的see the traffic light turn green看见交通灯变绿。 5. 考查固定句式。句式hardly...when...一...就....;句意:他一到路中央就看见一辆汽车突然出现并朝他冲了过来。 6. 考查代词。本文叙述的是Allee被撞的事情,所以使用代词him指代Allee,因为代词them指代复数名词。 7. 考查连词。句意:他被汽车撞了并扔掉几米之外。上下文之间是并列关系,所以使用连词and,而不是or。 8. 考查定冠词。本句中名词operation手术是一个可数名词,不定冠词an表示泛指,短语have an operation做手术。 9. 考查固定搭配。短语out of danger摆脱危险;句意:当我去看他的时候,他已经脱离了危险,但是看起来仍然脸色苍白。 10. 考查副词。本句中副词sincerely作为状语修饰谓语动词hope,我真诚地希望....;英语中的形容词通常作为定语或者表语,不能做状语修饰动词。 【名师点睛】 本文11. No such thing has ever happened. I have never seen such a beautiful place before. 而so是副词,意为“这(那)么;这(那)样;如此地”,主要修饰形容词、副词和分词。如: Last time I saw him he was so fat! He was not so much angry as disappointed. 但是,such和so都可以用于名词词组。本文主要介绍一下它们在名词词组中的用法。 一、后接可数名词的单数形式 1、直接跟名词时,用such;如: However did you make such a mistake? I have never heard of such a thing. Why are you in such a hurry? 注意:当such前面有no时,必须省去不定冠词a(an),因为no such本身已经包括了不定冠词,相当于not such a(an);如: I have no such book. (= I haven’t such a book.) 2、跟带有形容词的名词时,既可以用such,也可以用so,但应注意冠词位置的不同,如: I have never seen such a tall man. I have never seen so tall a man. He is not such a clever boy as his brother. He is not so clever a boy as his brother. 二、后接可数名词的复数形式或集合名词,无论有无修饰语都用such,如:Such things often happen in our daily life. Such people are dangerous. Whales are such smart animals that they communicate with each other. He made such stupid mistakes that the teacher tore up the whole paper. 三、后接不可数名词,无论有无修饰语都用such,如: Did you ever see such weather? You can’t drink such hot milk. She made such rapid progress that she soon began to write articles in English. 四、当复数名词或集合名词之前有few,many;不可数名词之前有little,much修饰时,用so,如: so many people / so many students / so few days so much time / so much money / so little time等。 注意:上述词组中的so实际上修饰名词前的形容词。 比较下列两句: ①I have met many such people in my life. ②I didn't expect to meet so many people there. 上述两句中都有many,但却分别用了such和so,其位置不同,因此含义也不同。在①中,many和such同时修饰后面的名词;而②句中的so修饰的则是many。 五、当many、much、little、few单独作为名词使用时,用so; 如: There are so few that I can’t give you one. This is the girl I have told you so much about. So much for today. 六、such可以和all、some、other、another、one、no、many、any、few、several等词同时修饰一个名词,但它的位置通常是放在这些词的后面,如: All such possibilities must be considered. I need some such cards. One such dictionary is enough for me. We have had several such Chinese paintings already. I hope never to meet with another such accident. 考点:考查短文改错
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The municipal(市政)office of foreign affairs has published a book to recommend English translations of Chinese dishes, which aims to help restaurants avoid bizarre translations. It provides the names of main dishes of famous Chinese cuisines in plain English, “an official with the city’s Foreign Affairs office said .” Restaurants are encouraged to use the proposed translations, but it will not be compulsory .“ It’s the city’s latest effort to bridge the culture gap for foreign travelers in China.

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She asked the volunteers to answer a questionnaire on the color of their dreams and their childhood exposure to film and TV.

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B. The relationship between dreams and types of television and films that people watch.

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D. Eva Murzyn is a professor at Dundee University in Britain.

4.In which magazine can you find the article?

A. Aging Healthily       B. Psychology Analysis

C. New Scientist         D. TV And Film Reviews

 

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