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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。

短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。

修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last weekend I visited my best friend in London, which was supposed to be excited. Melina, whom I have not seen for three years, offered to take me on a sighting tour by car. Unfortunate, she ended up doing everything but that! First, she showed me around the building where she had gotten her first job. Then she drove me to the café where she had met first boyfriend . Before I could say everything, she smiled at me and said she wanted to take me to another place where was special to her. I was very disappointed when we got on the place where she had bought her car! Besides, she kept talk about herself all day long! I was fed up with it, but I couldn’t make her to stop. When she finally decides to call it a day, she turned around and found me asleep!

 

1.excited改为exciting 2.have改为had 3.Unfortunate改为Unfortunately 4.first前加her 5.everything改为anything 6.where改为which 7.on改为to 8.talk改为talking 9.删除make后to 10.decides改为decided 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,叙述了上周末我去伦敦看望多年未见的老朋友Menina的故事。 1.excited改为exciting 考查形容词。本句中关系代词which指代前一句“上周末我到伦敦看望最好的朋友”这件事情,所以使用形容词exciting。因为形容词exciting令人兴奋的,通常修饰事物;而excited则用来形容人。 2.have改为had 考查时态。我三年没有看见Melina是在我这次去看望她之前,而我去看望她是上周末。所以本句使用过去完成时。 3.Unfortunate改为Unfortunately 考查副词。在英语中通常使用副词做状语修饰形容词、副词或动词。所以本句使用副词Unfortunately修饰整个句子。 4.first前加her 考查代词。通常在叙述词前面要有一些限定词修饰。所以本句在序数词first前面加her表示特指。句意:她开车带我去看了她遇见第一个男朋友的咖啡馆。 5.everything改为anything 考查代词。本句中anything表示“一些事情”,everything表示“所有事情”,本句表示在我说话之前,她就要带我去另外一个地方。 6.where改为which 考查定语从句。本句中关系代词which指代先行词another place,在句中做主语。关系副词where在句中只能做状语,不能做主语。 7.on改为to 考查固定搭配。短语get to....到达....;get on表示“上车”;当我们到达他买车的地方时,我很失望。 8.talk改为talking 考查固定搭配。短语keep doing sth一直做某事;句意:而且,她整天都在谈论她自己。 9.删除make后to 考查固定结构。固定结构make sb do sth让某人做某事;在主动结构中,do前面的不定式符号to可以省略。 10. 【名师点睛】 高考短文改错考点层次一般而言可依次分为词法的测试、句法的测试和语篇的测试三个层面。考点层次越高,就越能测试出考生运用语言的能力。低层次的考点往往侧重于语法方面的考查,而高层次的考点往往侧重于考生对文章意义方面的理解。 一、词法改错 词法的测试包括:定冠词和不定冠词的用法;名词的单复数和名词的所有格;动词的时态、语态、语气,情态动词和非谓语动词等;人称代词、人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等的用法;介词的搭配;并列连词、从属连词的用法;形容词、副词的区别以及比较级和最高级的用法;固定搭配和习惯用法。 例如:本题中的11. 考查形容词 12. 考查副词 13. 考查代词 二、句法改错 句法的测试包括:主谓语在数上的一致性;名词性从句、定语从句和强调句;句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性和逻辑性。 例如:本题中的 14. 考查定语从句 15. 考查固定搭配 三、语篇改错 语篇的测试包括:上下文的时态是否一致;上下文中的代词指代是否一致;上下文中的逻辑关系是否一致。 16. 考查上下文指代 17. 考查时态 考点:考查短文改错
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