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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jerry,

I'm sorry for having no time to pay visit to Hangzhou with you next week. The reason why I can't spare time is because there are many friend of mine who are facing a coming English exam. There has no doubt that it is important for them. They are looking forward on to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successful. As a result, I will spend time help them at that time. In addition, I will attend a party which aim to raise money for the people in the earthquake-hit area. But l want to put off their time of the visit to the first weekend of next month. Is it OK?

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

 

1.pay后加a 2.because改为that 3.friend改为friends 4.has改为is 5.删除to前on 6.successful改为successfully 7.help改为helping 8.aim改为aims 9.But改为So 10.their改为our 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于应用文,文中李华向Jerry解释下周无法陪对方去杭州的原因。 1.pay后加a 考查冠词。固定搭配pay a visit to....参观....;句意:对不起下周我没有时间和你一起去参观杭州了。 2.because改为that 考查表语从句连接词。当the reason做主语的时候,不能使用because引导表语从句。因为不能说:原因是因为.....;只能使用that引导这个表语从句,意为:原因是....;that在句中不充当任何成分,只是一个引导词而已。 3.friend改为friends 考查名词复数形式。前面有形容词many修饰,说明应该使用可数名词的复数形式friends。 4.has改为is 考查谓语动词。本句属于固定句式:There be....有....;这个句式表示“存在有....”;而动词have表示“有...”,表示“个人拥有....”,该词是不能用在there be句式里的。 5.删除to前on 考查固定短语。短语look forward to...期待...;原文中的介词on是多余的。句意:他们正期待着我帮助他们。 6.successful改为successfully 考查副词。在英语中通常使用副词做状语修饰形容词、副词或者动词。而形容词通常在句中做表语或者定语。本句中使用副词successfully修饰动词短语get through the exam。 7.help改为helping 考查动名词。句式spend some time (in) doing sth花费时间做某事;其中的动名词doing 作为介词in的宾语,in还可以省略。所以本句使用helping做宾语。 8.aim改为aims 考查主谓一致。本题属于定语从句,先行词是a party,关系代词which指代先行词在句中作主语,因为先行词是单数名词,所以谓语动词也使用单数形式aims。 9.But改为So 考查连词。句意:而且我要参加一个为地震灾区募捐资金的聚会,所以我想把我们的参观时间推迟到下个月第一个周末。上下文之间是因果关系,所以使用so连接。 10. 【名师点睛】 本文11. 名词的用法是很多中学生容易混淆的,高考短文改错往往把名词与主谓一致、名词的修饰语以及冠词的使用放在一块儿考查。高考短文改错对名词的考查主要集中在以下几方面:1.可数名词数的使用错误;2.可数名词和不可数名词的混淆;3.名词作定语的把握;4.抽象名词具体化的变化等。要在短文改错中准确辨别名词方面的错误,首先应对名词中容易出现错误的知识点掌握清楚。 易错点回顾: 1.常考的不可数名词 advice (建议), furniture (家具), clothing (衣服), fun (乐趣), homework(家庭作业), information(信息), paper(纸), sugar(糖), work(工作), fruit(水果), harm(损害), news(新闻), progress(进步), traffic(交通), trouble(麻烦), weather(天气)等。 这些名词前不能直接用冠词或数词修饰,而应该与某些特定的单位名词连用,来表示"量"的概念。如: a piece of news/advice, an article of clothing/furniture 2. 单复数同形的词 means(方式), works(工厂), sheep(绵羊), deer(鹿)等。 注意正确区分它们的数:every means (单数),all means(复数)。 3.可以具体化的抽象名词 surprise, knowledge, success, failure, pleasure, interest, joy, help, honour, exercise等。 这类名词如果仅仅表示"概念",是不可数名词,但如果表示具体的人或事,特别是前面出现形容词修饰时,就成了可数名词,前面需加冠词。如: He answered in surprise. 他吃惊地回答。(不可数名词) He suddenly appeared on a rainy night, which was a great surprise to us. 他在一个雨夜突然出现,这使我们非常吃惊(令大家吃惊的事情)。(可数名词) 4. 具有"两重性"的名词 有些名词既可以是可数名词也可以是不可数名词,很有迷惑性。这类名词可数与否往往取决于不同的意思: 不可数或者可数 work 工作;作品;著作;paper 纸 报纸;文件;time 时间 倍数;次数;一段时光;light 光 灯 chicken 鸡肉 小鸡;character 性格 (戏剧、小说中的)人物; 【典例调研】 [例1]I told her not to use the office phone for personal call. call →calls。本题为名词数的误用。call为可数名词,在此语境中须用复数;如用单数须加不定冠词a。 [例2]He left words with my mother that he would come to help me in the afternoon and he kept his words. 第二个words →word。本题属名词数的误用。keep one’s word为固定短语,意为"遵守诺言"。 [例3]Father went to his doctor for advices about his heart trouble. advices →advice。本题属名词数的误用。advice是不可数名词。 [例4]Tom, will you boys play soldiers outside? There’s not enough rooms for you here. rooms →room。本题属名词数的误用。当"空间"讲时room为不可数名词。 [例5]You can get many information from the Internet. many →much。本题是名词修饰语的误用。information是不可数名词,因此前面用much修饰。 [例6]The writer goes to the library every a few days. a去掉。本题属于汉语式思维造成的成分累赘。every 本身已包含"一"的概念,因此不能受汉语的影响而再加冠词。 【指导·借鉴】 在短文改错中,命题者往往会从汉语式思维的角度设置"陷阱",因此大家应从分析语境入手,摆脱汉语式思维的干扰,分清名词的性质,如果一个名词是可数名词,它一般只存在两种形式:单数或复数,如:a personal call, personal calls, 但绝对不能说personal call。另外对有些名词的数,绝对不能含糊,如information总是一个不可数名词,不可能有其他形式的变化,不能说an information,或many information。 考点:考查短文改错
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