Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear fellow students,

With the popularity of cell-phones and the Internet, some of us students spend too much time play with cell-phones or computer games, which are bad for our studies. Worse still, we had little time communicate with our parents and friends. So do we have time for physical exercise.

What shall we do it to improve the situation? All of us shouldn't realize the negative effects of modern media. Let's limit your time of playing with cell-phones or computer games. Instead we should spend less time playing sports or talking with our parents and friends, who helps us relax and communicate.

That's all. Thank you!

Answer

1.play--playing

2.are--is

3.had--have

4.communicate前面加to

5.so—Neither/Nor

6. it去掉

7.shouldn’t--should

8.your--our

9.less--more

10.who---which

【解析】

1.play—playing 考查动词短语。Spend time in doing 花费时间做某事；

2.are--is 考查主谓一致 。which 代指玩手机这件事，谓语动词用第三人称单数.

3.had—have 考查动词的时态。整个文章用一般现在时来叙述。

4.communicate前面加to 考查动词短语。Have little time to do sth 没有时间做某事；

5.so—Neither/Nor 考查不定词。根据上文提到we had little time communicate with our parents and friends没有时间与父母和朋友交流，故下文提到没有时间进行体育锻炼。

6.it去掉 考查特殊疑问句。句意：我们应该做什么来改善这种状况呢？

7.shouldn’t--should 考查句意理解。句意：我们应该意识到现在媒体的负面影响；

8.your--our 考查代词。句意：让我们限制一下玩手机和电脑的时间。

9.less--more 考查形容词的比较级。句意：反而我们应该花更多的时间在运动上或与父母交流上，这能帮我们更好的放松。

10.who---which 考查定语从句。Which代指花费更多的时间在锻炼或与父母交流上，故用which.

考点 ：短文改错。