Question

短文改错

文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Zhang Danuo, editor at the newspaper office, offered to help Yuncheng, which is physically disabled, achieving his ambition to write a book. Every week or so, he set Yuncheng a writing assignment. Although he was often ill, and sometimes could hardly pick up his pen, Yuncheng kept write and  finally sent his finished essays to Zhang Danuo. Yuncheng was always happy when he finished an assignment. “I felt everything in the world was beautiful and how wonderfully it was to live in the world,” he said. Knowing that Yuncheng’s book describes what his life it is like, what his hopes and dreams are and how he overcomes the problems what he faces every day, both the old and the young has been inspired by his courage and his good heart and her book has sold well. Yuncheng says that because his life will not be a long one, he must do so much as he can in the time that is left to him.

Answer

1.editor前加 an

2.which-who

3.achieving-achieve

4.write -writing

5.wonderfully- wonderful

6.去掉it

7.what -that/which

8.has -have

9.her-his

10.so- as

【解析】

1.editor前加 an考察冠词。句意：他是一位报社的编辑。

2.which-who考察引导词。句意who做成云的定语从句。

3.achieving-achieve考察动词。句意：实现自己写一本书的愿望。

4.write -writing考察动名词。句意：每个周末，他都会给成云一个标签。

5.wonderfully- wonderful考察形容词。句意：“我感觉世界上的一切都是美好的并且生活在是这个世界上是多么神奇啊”。

6.去掉it 考察代词。

7.what -that/which考察引导词。句意：得知他的书是描写他的生活的，及他的希望和梦想，及时如何克服困难的。

8.has -have考察谓语动词。句意：不管是年轻人还是老年人都收到了鼓舞。

9.her-his 考察人称代词。人称要与前文保持一致。

10.

考点：短文改错。