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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The famous person I would really like to interview him is Yang Liwei. He is not only the first Chinese to going to space but also one of the greatest astronaut in the world. I have long interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal by him about it.

If I could interview him, I will ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was training. I’d also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is so great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personally life, that must be very interesting.

 

1.删除is前的him 2.going改为go 3.astronaut改为astronauts 4.long后加been 5.by改为from 6.will改为would 7.train改为trained 8.so改为such 9.personally改为personal 10.that改为which 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,介绍了中国第一个宇航员杨利伟,以及作者想采访杨利伟时想问的问题。 1.删除is前的him 考查句子结构。本句中I would really like to interview是定语从句,修饰先行词the famous person,关系代词that/who指代先行词作为动词interview的宾语,被省略掉了,所以原句中的him是多余的。 2.going改为go 考查不定式做定语。当不定式所修饰的名词是序数词或者由序数词修饰时,需要使用不定式的主动语态表示被动含义。句意:他不仅是第一个进入太空的中国人而且还是世界上最伟大的宇航员之一。 3.astronaut改为astronauts 考查名词单复数。固定结构“one of+可数名词复数形式”意为“....之一”。句意:他还是世界上最伟大的宇航员之一。 4.long后加been 考查时态。本句是现在完成时,句中的interested是形容词,而不是过去分词,所以要在助动词have的后面接过去分词been的形式。 5.by改为from 考查固定短语。短语learn sth from.....从...学到.....;句意:我 可以从他身上学到很多很多。 6.will改为would 考查虚拟语气。本句是if引导的条件状语从句的虚拟语气,与现在事实相反的时候,条件状语从句中使用“过去时”,主句中使用“would/could/should/might + have done”的形式,所以本句中使用would。 7.train改为trained 考查语态。本句主语he与动词train之间构成被动关系,所以使用被动语态的形式。句意:如果我能够采访他,我会问他是什么让他成为宇航员以及他是如何训练的。 8.so改为such 考查固定句式。句式:so/such....that....如此...以至于....;其中so的后面要接形容词或副词,而such的后面要接名词或名词短语。本句中great fun是名词短语,所以使用such。 9.personally改为personal 考查形容词。在英语中形容词通常做定语修饰名词,而副词通常做状语修饰形容词、副词或动词。所以本句是使用形容词personal修饰名词life。 10. 【名师点睛】 要想做好“短文改错”题,不妨试试分成“四步走”,遵循“四原则”,实施“四查法”。具体做法如下: (一) 分成“四步走” 1. 通读全文,了解大意。注意语篇结构和行文逻辑。不能在不了解文章大意的情况下,逐字逐行地进行修改。 2. 先易后难,缩小范围。在通读全文的过程中,可以先把文中明显的错误找出来改正,然后再根据具体语境,仔细分析判断,将注意力集中在较难的句子上。 3. 把握句意,逐行判断。可依据“动词形,名词数,注意形和副;非谓动词细辨别,习惯用法要记住;句子结构多分析,逻辑错误须关注”的口诀行事。 4. 再次通读,复查验证。把大部分错误改正之后,如果还有拿不准的地方,就应再次通读全文,并利用语感来做最后的判断。 纵观近几年的“短文改错”题,正确的地方只有一处;多词和缺词的地方约有3处;用错词的地方一般有6个,且多为动词。这种比例或许也能帮助你做出最后判断。 (二) 遵循“四原则” 1. 改动处以最少为原则。“短文改错”题要求每行只能改动一处,改动的方法可以是增词、删词或换词,但无论作何种改动,只能是增加一词、减少一词或把一个词改成另一个词。当然,没有错误的行无需改动。也就是说,每行改动之处不能超过一个。 2. 实词以改变词形为原则。在“短文改错”题中,一般只是改变实词的形式,而不能改变实词的词义,也不能将其改换成另一个实词,更不能随便增删。例如: ① The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon ... (把keeps改为keeping) ② Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from ... (把clearly改为clear) 3. 虚词以添加或删除为原则。历年的“短文改错”题中需要添加或删除的地方差不多有3至4处。这些需要添、删的词一般都是虚词(如冠词、介词等),不是实词(如动词、名词等),否则会改变句子的原意。例如: ① They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early ... (删去that) ② He was looking for a glass the cupboard. (the前面加in) 4. 以保持句子原意不变为原则。做“短文改错”题时,一般不应改变句子原意。改错时,应该针对短文中的用词错误、语法错误、逻辑错误加以改正,不应更改作者的原意。做到换词不改意,加词不增意,去词不减意。如有多种改法,应以保持原意为条件,择其佳者而从之。例如: But I have spent most my money, so I cannot… 改正:在my前加of。也有同学去掉most,这种改法虽改正了语法错误,但改变了原意。作者想说的是“花掉了大部分的钱,而不是全部”。 考点:考查记叙文阅读
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